Beneath - Comments

This is wonderful, and so incredibly sad though. I love the concept of it, I really like it when people write about/from the point of view of inanimate objects. I think it's unique, and wonderful. It's not the easiest thing to do, but it's not the hardest thing to do either. I loved this story. I only saw a few little errors throughout, nothing that big really. But overall, amazing job! I love your writing. Great story!

this is so wonderful. it's dreadfully sad, and i just LOVE that it's about a teddy bear. it should be really silly, but it's heartbreaking. thanks for submitting it to my contest, i'm judging entries so keep your eyes on the thread page. <3 ^-^

I don't think I've seen any stories like this, and it's rather brilliant. I really adore the narration.

Oh my God, this is depressing. I loved it so, so much. It's perfect. It's darling. I want to go get my giraffe pillow pet from my basement & snuggle her. Ugh, this is too much. Really original.

D: That was so sad! I love the concept here, it's like Toy Story except the stuffed animals can't move. Very well written, and very insightful. Now, if you excuse me, I feel like a terrible person, I gotta go hug all my stuffed animals now.

I literally almosst started crying!! While this is horrible heart-wrenching, I find it to be absolutely true. As children, we give our teddy bears feelings. As adults, we forget they ever had them. This is exquisite writing, and in it I see many truths about man as a whole. So glad I stumbled upon this!!