Sorry I'm Not The Perfect Daughter - Comments

  • i.refuse.2.sink

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    @ KatXWidowXHawk
    Hey thanks for the comment! But yea te story is still active thing have just been crazy with school and other personal stuff so update are slow rigt now
    September 7th, 2012 at 08:37pm
  • Mrs.Katsumi.Grinch

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    Is this still active this is a very cute story?

    Much <3 Kat
    September 7th, 2012 at 04:49pm
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    Love it, Molly is soo adorable I love it :) can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    August 20th, 2012 at 06:09pm
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    @ VampGirl4eva
    Oh ha sorry, the next chapters will be longer, but I have famIly and town an other personal stuff going on!! But I promise the next ones will be longer!!! Sorry but thanks for your comment!!
    August 18th, 2012 at 12:50am
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    @ MoMo_92
    Haha thanks for your comment! They are awesome!
    August 18th, 2012 at 12:49am
  • VampGirl4eva

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    these short chapters are really killing me
    August 17th, 2012 at 11:40pm
  • MoMo_92

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    Stupid twitter and pictures gosh no privacy at all and Matt is in his thirties soo he isn't too young for a grandchild it would be different if he was in his twenties thn he would be too young but he isn't sooo back off fans ok let him and his family have their own privacy without it being exploited on the Internet Grr fuckers, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    August 17th, 2012 at 11:28pm
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    @ MoMo_92
    thanks for your comment!! update is probably not possible tonight so tomorrow!!
    August 16th, 2012 at 06:23am
  • MoMo_92

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    Love it, I'm glad tht Arie is ok now let's hope tht the baby Molly is ok, stupid fans they better not post tht crap on the Internet unless they want to get sued, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    August 16th, 2012 at 04:34am
  • femme fatale.

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    Howdy, I'm from from comment swap and I don't mean to offend, I'm here to help out.

    So I have a few things I'm a little nit-picky about. First off, your chapters are very short and switch point of view a lot. If you have short chapters, just put the next POV in the next chapter.

    Two, I don't really understand this whole thing ... I guess a few things went over my head, but I don't know what's really going on here. Where do the OC's tie in with a7x ? I'm at a serious loss here.

    However, to end on a positive note, I do like the way you describe things. You don't describe just the way things look, but the feelings of things. I really dig that. Also you had a pretty decent sex scene, as short lived as it was. Good luck!
    August 15th, 2012 at 11:03pm
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    @ dream.keeper
    Can't wait :)
    August 15th, 2012 at 08:28am
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    @ MoMo_92
    thanks for your comment!!! glad you like her name! ill uodate tomorrow!
    August 15th, 2012 at 08:17am
  • MoMo_92

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    Love it, the baby is here and her name is beautiful, I can't wait to see this baby, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    August 15th, 2012 at 08:09am
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    I love it she was born on my birthday :)
    August 15th, 2012 at 07:05am
  • MoMo_92

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    Damn it I really thought tht Arie can give birth to the baby in peace, stupid twitter and which ever employee tht works at the hospital posted a tweet about Arie being in labour should get sued but thts just my opinion, anyhoo can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    August 14th, 2012 at 10:13am
  • MoMo_92

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    Omg tht baby is almost here!!! I'm sooo excited :) anyhoo I think tht Gage and Arie r goin to be great parents, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    August 12th, 2012 at 11:57am
  • EzioAuditore

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    I got here through comment swap.
    First of all I wanna say, I love the layout, except for the middle part...I think it's so small it looks a bit weird, but the rest of it is great!
    And now to the story...I have read the first seven chapters and I would have read more, but there's just a few things that I don't really like about this story.
    The story idea itself is great, really. It's an interesting plot and there's a lot of positive aspects, but I feel like one big problem is that there's not enough details in the story. This could be a lot more emotional and moving, if only you'd give the readers a bit more to work with. That way, the way you skip scenes all the time would be barely noticeable too. I just feel that this story is missing some things, but it isn't bad! You seem to be a good writer, just maybe try to work on some things. :)
    August 10th, 2012 at 11:50pm
  • MoMo_92

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    Love it, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    August 10th, 2012 at 10:06am
  • sowrongit'sSHANICE

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    Comment Swap.

    I have to admit I'm not a huge fan of A7X fics usually as they always seem to be quite cliché and not very well thought out, but I have to say that I find yours quite amazing, in short. What you've wrote so far is great and your attention to detail is superb, especially as you are able to set the scene so well through your use of descriptive wording and your explanations about the characters, if I didn't know for M.Shadows was I'd be able to picture him perfectly through your writing, so well done. Keep up the good work. Smile
    August 9th, 2012 at 09:07pm
  • MoMo_92

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    Love it, I'm glad tht there is a fan who like a7x and Arie and didn't judge her, anyhoo can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
    August 5th, 2012 at 03:35pm