This is so beautiful, I actually could water behind my eyes as I read the ending. The details at the end about what happened were really done well; it wasn't a story of the storm, you tied it back to what she wished and was looking for and I really liked that.
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The paragraph that starts with 'You're not here.' is amazing. It startled me, that she was alone, and I really felt it. Reading it again and knowing the truth, I saw that it all tied up neatly, no loose ends.
SPOILERS
The paragraph that starts with 'You're not here.' is amazing. It startled me, that she was alone, and I really felt it. Reading it again and knowing the truth, I saw that it all tied up neatly, no loose ends.
An excellent piece keep up the good work!! :)