Dreamless in Early Graves - Comments

This is so incredible.
The concept is perfect and the execution of it.. is immaculate<3
I'd love to see this bloom into a full series, or at least have something of a sequel?
There's so much room for their relationship to develop and same with characters and I'd love to see where you would take it (:
Very very very good job on this.

This was really good and very well-written. I know that this is just supposed to be a one shot and I like that about it, but another part of me wishes it would become a multi. But either way, I really enjoyed this!

Really brilliant! Loved every part of it, very well written and interesting :) Will there be any more chapters? I'd love to read more, i think there's so much potential!

Wow. That was so brilliant. I literally loved every second that I was reading it and was sad when it was over. You are an amazing writer and it most definitely shows. I don't think I saw any grammar mistakes at all. The only thing that caught my eye was that you have Mariana in the summary but Audrey in the story. Not really a big deal and it didn't hinder me from reading the story, I just thought I would point it out. The layout was very pretty and I loved the banner, along with the pictures of Jaime of course :P While I was reading the story I definitely could feel the passion and emotion that both Audrey and Jaime were feeling. I definitely got a little teary near the end and found myself wishing that Audrey would go back inside and apologize to Jaime. I really, really loved this and think you did a spectacular job using A Match Into Water for inspiration. Thank you so much for entering this in my contest and awesome job!

This was so well written. I felt the emotion. Wonderful job, Kayla :D