This is utterly fantastic. I loved every second, every word of it! You are an amazing writer. This was absolutely one of the BEST stories I have ever read. Actual published books included.
@ ArrogantlyLovable Thank you so much for such an amazing comment. This really did make my day! I want to be published, it's my dream. Getting there is another thing all on its own however. Thank you for reading and comment and I'm glad you enjoyed it!
I agree with the comment before mine. This story was beyond amazing. I know perfection is somewhat of a myth but if it were real, this would pretty much be it. So wonderfully written and fantastic. Great job.
WOW. Just, wow...I have no words. This was so beautifully written. I love the ending especially it left me feeling so hopeful and despairing all at the same time. If that makes any sense. Also...evil vampire Shadows...one of my favourite characterisations of M Shadows. Beautifully done.
It's been a long time, awasome story :)