I've always been "meh" about children-of-famous-people although I've written a few myself. But I have to say, this was really good and to top it off, you really had Funny's voice spot on. While I was reading his lines I could hear his voice actually saying them in my head and I love that so much. So good luck to you in the future with this fic and I'm interested to see how this goes and if the rest of the boys have the same voice.