The Gate Keeper - Comments

Dark layout, it suits your story well. Thank you for providing such an easy read. The color of the font, as well as the spacing went easy on my eyes.
From the summary i thought that this was going to be a slash story, though the first chapter threw me off. Your descriptions were done nicely, given a lot of thought and detail from what I could tell.
I haven't read far, but your story has great potential. You are a talented writer. This was an excellent read so far, thanks for an entertaining story. Best wishes in your writing.

Okay so I love your background! It's so dark and pretty. I love the dialouge a lot, you did a really good job. Uhm.. Like they said, the plot is really good. I'm legitly too tired to know half the things I'm saying, but it's good! Keep writing!
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this is really good! it's a really unique plot, from what i've gathered from the prologue/first chapter, and you deliver it really well. the writing style is good too, and from it i'm assuming it's some kind of historical fiction, right. if it is (which i'm like 99.9999% sure it is) the dialogue is good too. obviously nobody knows exactly how they spoke, but i think you've done a good job, heh. <3

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You use wonderful detail. I LOVE THAT. The summary pulled me in and I was excited to read it. It was different than what I normally read here, but I like it. Keep it up, buttercup! :)