Staring Down the Barrel - Comments

I love this. I loved the beginning. And I can't wait for the next chapter.

this story reminds me of the movie salt! just the whole russian assassin ordeal. well i am loving this so far! please update again soon :3

I'm loving this! I think the thing that makes me love this the most is how Yelena actually becomes Natasha. You know, like she was never Yelena instead of her just pretending to be Natasha on the outside but thinking like Yelena. I don't see people doing that often in stories. I can't wait to read more though! :D

A crowd forms around the died around the dead

an ambulance shoot past then i'm not 100% certain if you meant then or if you meant them so...

sorry it's taken me so long to comment/read. it's a great update.

I really like this! It's unique.

Best way to start the story! I loved it.

Even though you told me what's going to happen and things I really REALLY thought that he was going to say something about her saying "syn" haha.

There is a large window opened you wanted open.

Can't wait for Tuesday!