In Due Time - Comments

I really like this story. It was just lovely .I really hope you make this into a full length story.

You left me really wanting more y'know. =\ I'm disappointed it's over. I feel like it would be a really good full-length story!

loved it! :) they're both so cute :)
i liked that you left it a kind of open ending.

thank you for entering my contest! :)

Kinda reminds me of Kill The Lights, but at the same time, not. Only 'cause the motorcycles lol.
So I'm writing one in the same contest with Timmy and Jeremy is sorta the same, loving his brother and all. So yay! I'm glad you wrote it that way (:
Can't wait for the next chapter!

i really like that you havent made jeremy arrogant with all his success.
love this so far, can't wait for the second part! :)