It's been some time since my last comment swap and I put this aside and just got the time to read it. I'm glad I did. What you did in this short piece is capturing the reality of an affair. Like, you didn't give much detail but you did say enough and I really liked how fast I got pulled into it. I was hoping it would be more. And I also like that it's just two people; no names.
June 2nd, 2015 at 03:13pm