The Art of Playing - Comments

this is amaziiiiiing xx but why did you post the last chapter twice??

please updateeeee

keep writingggg

Just read through the story, absolutely love it!! Cannot wait for more :D

Comment Swap: okay, i just couldnt do it. I couldnt read your story with the picture of a naked man in the corner it just killed my concentration. For a girl, yeah i understand thats the kind of shit that greases your wheels but as a dude. no thanks. i know it sounds homophobic but i cant focus with something like that in the corner!

argh continue! this is truly amazing

I love this story, and I hope that you update soon! *subscribes*

This is great, better than the original and I eagerly await the next update!

I love your story!

I like your style of writing! It's lively and doesn't bore the reader. It might be a better storyline if you had made it more your own instead of tying it so closely to fifty shades, but overall a good, interesting read. Keep it up!

Well. Update. Now. I've given you the last comment and I want the next chapter! XD Pleaseeee. I beg of you!!!

Update!! Like the plot!!

I like it! Elisa is annoying and of course Elliot is hot ;)

I've missed you

Omg this story is one of the most interesting I've read while on mibba, I'm glad you decided to write it hope to see an update from you soon.

Please update soon!!!

Wow. That is all.

Omj. I love this. <3
You're Awesome.

Are you trying to make this story based off Christian Grey's brother Elliot in 50 Shades of Grey? (Did you know that was an actual character?). I do like the story, and am very interested to see how this plays out. Other than what another person commented on grammatical errors, I like it a lot. Keep up the good work!

ooh they got down n durrrtttyy hahaha
thumbs up :D