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  • CartoonBanshee

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    this is amaziiiiiing xx but why did you post the last chapter twice??
    June 26th, 2013 at 09:59pm
  • CartoonBanshee

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    please updateeeee
    May 6th, 2013 at 06:22pm
  • CartoonBanshee

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    keep writingggg
    February 6th, 2013 at 06:28pm
  • sunnydee

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    Just read through the story, absolutely love it!! Cannot wait for more :D
    December 17th, 2012 at 08:04am
  • E P Kent

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    Comment Swap: okay, i just couldnt do it. I couldnt read your story with the picture of a naked man in the corner it just killed my concentration. For a girl, yeah i understand thats the kind of shit that greases your wheels but as a dude. no thanks. i know it sounds homophobic but i cant focus with something like that in the corner!
    December 3rd, 2012 at 02:25am
  • CartoonBanshee

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    argh continue! this is truly amazing
    December 1st, 2012 at 11:56pm
  • BrooklynMarie

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    I love this story, and I hope that you update soon! *subscribes*
    November 26th, 2012 at 06:00am
  • laurenchloe

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    This is great, better than the original and I eagerly await the next update!
    November 25th, 2012 at 04:05pm
  • laniebaby

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    I love your story!
    November 22nd, 2012 at 06:30pm
  • fall0ut

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    I like your style of writing! It's lively and doesn't bore the reader. It might be a better storyline if you had made it more your own instead of tying it so closely to fifty shades, but overall a good, interesting read. Keep it up!
    November 22nd, 2012 at 07:53am
  • TyMaeTrains

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    Well. Update. Now. I've given you the last comment and I want the next chapter! XD Pleaseeee. I beg of you!!!
    November 3rd, 2012 at 10:02pm
  • ALIxgaskarth

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    Update!! Like the plot!!
    October 15th, 2012 at 02:26am
  • sohohugges

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    I like it! Elisa is annoying and of course Elliot is hot ;)
    October 11th, 2012 at 07:08am
  • xwritteninsharpiex

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    I've missed you
    October 8th, 2012 at 08:17pm
  • young'lovee

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    Omg this story is one of the most interesting I've read while on mibba, I'm glad you decided to write it hope to see an update from you soon.
    October 8th, 2012 at 12:18am
  • BaD_rOmAnCe

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    Please update soon!!!
    September 6th, 2012 at 11:20pm
  • sophii

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    Wow. That is all.
    August 24th, 2012 at 05:28am
  • sophii

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    Omj. I love this. <3
    You're Awesome.
    August 20th, 2012 at 02:16pm
  • LoveGame13

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    Are you trying to make this story based off Christian Grey's brother Elliot in 50 Shades of Grey? (Did you know that was an actual character?). I do like the story, and am very interested to see how this plays out. Other than what another person commented on grammatical errors, I like it a lot. Keep up the good work!
    August 13th, 2012 at 12:21am
  • HotRanger69

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    ooh they got down n durrrtttyy hahaha
    thumbs up :D
    August 4th, 2012 at 03:29am
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