The Needle and the Paint Brush - Comments

What a better way to read stories? Eating pop corn and listening to music, you know what made this better? Your story, I loved it, I'm definitely recommending and subscribing! It makes a difference to most of the stories I've written/read recently.

This is a very interesting beginning, a doll that smiles - that can’t be a good sign for things to come. Great writing, the story so far flows well and the description is well portrayed. Excellent writing, keep it up!