The Point of No Return - Comments

This was a great entry. I could tell you knew your skating stuff. It was nice that you elaborated on that part of her life instead of making it all about the relationship. I also loved that it wasn't a one shot. The chapters were nice. The way the song was incorporated was sweet. Overall, this was a very good entry for my contest and I hope to have the winners up around the 23rd!

It moved kind of fast for me but I think this is pretty cute :)

I mean, I can relate to her because I'm an athlete and all that but I think you did great at writing how she did the tricks and what tricks she did and especially what she wore.

I bet you skate.