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  • StereoSoldier;

    StereoSoldier; (100)

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    I love love love this! Its has such great detail to it! And very well written, please update soon! I had to read this chapter twice because of how good it is! You can tell the love he gives her. its just...WOW!
    July 27th, 2012 at 12:35am
  • MadolcheMisu

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    I really like the layout, very attention grabbing. Also, I'm curious to see where this goes. She's threatened to leave, but I have this feeling that when he pushes her to go it may not go that smoothly. I'm also wondering what kind of person Darren is for her to love him so much. There must be something in the core. Just all around very intriguing.
    July 26th, 2012 at 10:37pm
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