If I'm James Dean You're Audrey Hepburn - Comments

  • Red The Small

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    I love this <3 you should updateee :)
    June 13th, 2013 at 12:29am
  • Abmora01

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    Please update I love it...... I what to know what happens:)<3
    December 21st, 2012 at 06:56am
  • Abmora01

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    Please update I love it...... I what to know what happens:)<3
    December 21st, 2012 at 06:56am
  • park sungjun

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    Please update! I love this so much!
    August 26th, 2012 at 02:50am
  • aliyahSWS

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    pwetty pwease update i want more <3
    August 21st, 2012 at 08:10am
  • Diellza

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    This is perfection, I love the plot so much! This story gave me goosebumps, I love it, I love it. Update soon please!
    August 2nd, 2012 at 09:54am
  • foreverisalldatineed

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    this was great, i seriously can't wait for more. <3
    July 30th, 2012 at 05:28am
  • han jisung xx

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    This was still good. Hope for more. :)
    July 29th, 2012 at 05:50pm
  • xwritteninsharpiex

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    this is lovely x
    July 29th, 2012 at 04:13pm
  • Bambie!

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    Comment swap has brought me to this story of yours. It's sweet and nicely done. The great news is that there were little to no spelling or grammatical errors that I saw. It's a cute concept but I do feel like the relationship is kinda rushed. It's not necessarily bad, but I'm just a bit old fashioned to the point where I think the most sweetest kiss is a small peck on the first date XD. Good work and keep writing! Thank you for sharing your story!
    July 28th, 2012 at 07:51am
  • TasteTheCourage

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    Hi there :) Your story was sent my way through comment swap. I like the concept here. Just a few suggestions: Your dialogue should be broken up a bit instead of runon sentences for the character. It will help make them more human and relatable. Give them a pause, a movement or something. It helps! Good luck and thank you for letting me read!!! :)
    July 28th, 2012 at 05:58am
  • Domie

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    Very beautiful!
    July 27th, 2012 at 04:48pm
  • han jisung xx

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    When I got this through comment swap and I saw the title I was hoping it was a SWS story. So glad it is. I loved reading arranged marriage stories because it's the same plot idea but they're very original and that's what I like about this. I can't wait to see where this goes. :)
    July 27th, 2012 at 08:43am
  • everything-anywhere

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    Nice job(: I like it
    July 27th, 2012 at 03:57am
  • Domie

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    I'm liking it so far. It has a good potential to turn into something great. Also I. Like your style of writing. *subscribed*
    July 26th, 2012 at 04:19pm