Comment swap has brought me to this story of yours. It's sweet and nicely done. The great news is that there were little to no spelling or grammatical errors that I saw. It's a cute concept but I do feel like the relationship is kinda rushed. It's not necessarily bad, but I'm just a bit old fashioned to the point where I think the most sweetest kiss is a small peck on the first date XD. Good work and keep writing! Thank you for sharing your story!
Hi there :) Your story was sent my way through comment swap. I like the concept here. Just a few suggestions: Your dialogue should be broken up a bit instead of runon sentences for the character. It will help make them more human and relatable. Give them a pause, a movement or something. It helps! Good luck and thank you for letting me read!!! :)
When I got this through comment swap and I saw the title I was hoping it was a SWS story. So glad it is. I loved reading arranged marriage stories because it's the same plot idea but they're very original and that's what I like about this. I can't wait to see where this goes. :)