This story is pretty decent, actually, except for the grammatical errors, which from your intro, I thought was gonna be pretty terrible. But come time for me to read the story, it's not bad at all. Not bad at all. I do hope you keep writing, because it looks like you enjoy it. The plot is intriguing. OH! By the way, the little lion bit? I love it. So cute. <3 And I just Oh-so-enjoy reading about women who end up being very powerful in the end. =)
August 28th, 2012 at 01:47am