Guitar Hero - Comments

I just re-read this, please update, I know it's a long shot

I love this story! Can't wait for the next update.

gasp...I can't wait to see where this goes....

Oh my god finally! Been waiting for this for a while.

Holy shit!!! Michelle ur a fucking jealous ass bitch and just becuz of tht I hope Brian doesn't go out with u ever I mean u cause so much shit becuz Brian likes Ari and not u get over it bitch and so the only way for u to feel better is by babbling ur damn mouth about something tht is irrelevant to u just so u think u got a shot with Brian grow the fuck up and move on this is y Brian probably doesn't like u becuz ur a bitch u tear people down just so u can feel superior, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Oh my, it's out in the open. Poor Junior. Poor Ari. The feels.

This is amazing. I can't wait for more. It's so different and I love it. Update soon, darling. I can't handle cliffhangers.

This is a really good story :) I love that it is different from the others
and I'm looking forward to the next chapter, you left us with such a cliffhanger...

OMG WHY CAN'T SHE JUST LIKE HIM BACK D;

You have no idea how much I NEED to know what happens next. Awesome story :)

i totally agree with MoMo_92

I found this chapter to be comical, one Papa Gates and Suzy was goin to get it on after their romantic dinner and Arianna wasn't to pleased with tht ummm obviously they r married so thts what they do Ari, two I find it hilarious tht Ari is jealous of Suzy and thinks tht she can get rid of her by tellin Brian tht she loves him yea he will love u....like a daughter, three the look on her face when Brian was confessin his feelings to her was hilarious, four the passion tht Brian gave her was hot, and five I laughed when Brian's parents walked in on them becuz Ari was embarassed tht the man tht she claims to love saw her kissin his son, Arianna just give up on Papa Gates becuz he doesn't want u like tht at all he is a married man lets not pull a fucking Jerry Springer or Maury and u confess tht u love him and thn be embarassed when Papa Gates doesn't feel the same way, if anything u love the idea of him but not him and thts ur problem, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Oh man I really like this story. I don’t think I’ve read a story like this on Mibba, so kudos on coming up with the idea. I totally like that Ari has a crush on an older man that just so happens to be Brian’s dad. I’m super interested in reading more.

Holy wow! This chapter was so good! So much awkwardness, then the stuff with junior at the end, him declaring that he loved her and he was going to sweep her off of her feet with his "passion"...damn!
I cringed for her at the very end when Brian sr. and suzy walked in on them in that position..lol. I just want her to realize already that Jr is everything she likes in Sr. and more, just a younger more suitable version. It could be so hot between these two!. More soon please! I love this:)

Wow, great chapter. Loved it. Makes me wonder what Ari will do now that Junior has admitted his feelings and pretty much made a move on her. Looking forward to the next update soon.

Holy Bajeezus! Can I say awkward at the end there? lol I love this cant wait for more keep up the amazing work!

Holy shit! So much to say about this. Kind of surprised she went to just spend time with Brian. Then of course that was kind of ruined when she found out that Brian and Suzy were planning on sex. Kind of gross to think about haha since they're like my parents age. But I'm kind of bummed she didn't go to the football game, and at the same time, glad because the thing with her and Junior probably wouldn't have happened. I do think he was a little fast in saying he loved her, mostly because it really hasn't been all that long since he realized he liked her, but oh well. That kiss was fucking awesome though, and I'm really looking forward to whatever fight he's going to be putting up. Then of course more embarrassment when they were caught. Loved this! Can't wait for more! :D

I think it was 73 or 75% of PMSing is just in a female's head. At least, I have been told that a few times. Anywho, I loved the update!

Ooh, why do I get the impression that Brian went to her Mom and told her some scheme he had planned to win over Ari...lol, if I'm right I fear he will get shot down in flames...lol. Update soon! I need to know what is going to happen at this game! I Loved this, even if you did just call it a filler:)

First off, I HATE how guys always assume girls are on their periods whenever a girl is a little snappy. Guys are idiots though, so I'll just settle for smacking them in the back of the head when they do it. XD Anyway, I wonder why Junior's wanting Arianna to go to the game. And he wants it really bad if he got both Matt and Arianna's mom to talk her into it. I so want to know what his sly ass is planning. Great update though! :D