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Loved the update. Love the story. Great concept. Can't wait to read more.

Loved the update. Love the story. Great concept. Can't wait to read more.

I really like this story, it's really good, it breaks my heart tht Brian thinks tht Arianna has a crush on him when it's really his father and also Arianna I find it kinda cute and disturbing tht u have a crush on Papa Gates but one he is in love with his wife, two u r too young for him, three he only sees u as Brian's friend and nothing more and four he is goin to reject u once u decided to confess ur love to him and u will crushed soo I think u should save urself the heartache and just like someone else ur age like Brian and get to know him instead of constantly bickering with him I mean he only does tht becuz he likes u very much and he thinks u like him but u don't cuz ur in love with his dad which is again cute but disturbing in so many ways tht u could be called jail bait, Michelle get over it ok Brian doesn't like u he is only using u so don't be a jealous, petty, bullying bitch ok it's not a good look on u at all, poor Zacky but at least he knows tht he was trying way to hard in trying to be with Arianna becuz if it wasn't for Brian Arianna would be playing him like a damn yo-yo, xcan't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

OH MY REV! OH MY FUCKING REV! YOU REALLY NEED TO FUCKING UPDATE THIS STORY OR I THINK I'M GOING TO DIE FOR EXCITEMENT!

I think Zack and Jessica will hook up. Junior is cute when he's utterly clueless about who Ari really likes. Looking forward to the next update.

Oh, wow, that was gross. Zack's gonna be embarrassed when he gets reminded that he puked on Arianna, but it's good that he's not mad at her. I definitely think that Junior was right in telling Zack about what Arianna said though, even if he did say something that was meant to be private. At least she doesn't have to do it herself. And oh man, I loved how quickly Jessica got over her crush on Johnny. XD Poor guy. But now that ending's got me wanting more! D: Update soon! I want to know what's next!

Oh man! Junior is obviously clueless but its still cute. Cant wait for the next update.

Aww, poor Zacky! Im sure he is going to be horrified when he realizes he puked on his crush...lool and then Brian..oh dear, I'm rooting for him, Ari needs to get over his dad and go for "Junior". I wonder if she will clue in that he wants her? And the whole "Johnny's a dud" thing made me snicker, how quickly she forgot about him...poor kid! I could totally see her a nd Zacky getting together! More soon, I simply love this story!

Holy, ok, I just found this and read all of the chapters. I love it so much, its so good! I love how you seem to capture the whole awkward teenager thing. It seriously brings me back to highschool with all of the crushes and feeling like you are so in love and having guy friends that you are totally oblivious about...lol, oh man. Just love it!

I cant wait for the next chapter, I want to know what happens at this party! Will Jessica get recognition from Johnny Boy (I love this little crush she has on him) and will there be alcohol involved? because the possibilities are endless with that...More please...Update soon!

Seriously loving this. Cant really say anything else.

Another dream? Yeah, she's definitely got feelings for Junior, or is at least attracted to him without realizing it. Her obliviousness is frustrating though. But I loved the smart ass comments Junior made when she came over. Can't wait for more! :D

Doh! That's so... cute, weird describing Brian like that. I'm almost sure he thinks it's him. Looking forward to see what plans he comes up with later thinking he has the right answer for her crush. Great chapter, very entertaining =)

Hm, what's going on with Junior? Or well, I guess I'm just wondering why's he's getting more obvious about his crush. I also want to know who he thinks she's crushing on, or is he just saying he knows but doesn't have a clue? I so badly want to get inside his head. Great update! :D

I loved this. Looking forward to the next one.

I always hate it when the girls are bitches, but that's my personal opinion. I'm kind of hoping Michelle has a decent reason for snapping like she did, but I kind of think she's only acting like that because she realizes that Junior has a thing for Arianna. And I still love Zack. I feel like she's not even giving him a real chance because she's so hung up on Brian. Not saying that he's going to be the one she ends up marrying and spending the rest of her life with, but she should at least give him a real chance instead of writing him off as someone she can only be friends with. Can't wait for more though. :)

Zack is adorable in this. So looking forward to more.

Sorry for not commenting on the last chapter. >< My latptop spazzed on me, and I forgot to come back and comment. But anyway, how cute was that last chapter! I fucking love Zack. You make him so damn adorable! And that kiss! You make me want to die from cuteness overload! I'm going to go off and squeal like crazy because I just loved that chapter! Fucking fantastic update! :D

I LOVE THIS :)

When her and Brian kissed and she said she didnt feel that 'spark' right away, i think that's pretty significant. I mean, she's built up this great fantasy in her head, but it could all be wrong. And then when Brian into Junior, i was like "oh, snap!" Hahaa. I can't wait for more! :)

Well that was pretty interesting. I'm wondering what the actual meaning behind it is honestly. Like does a part of her really want to be with Junior or was it just her way of realizing the Junior has feelings for her? Dream chapters alwasy make me think haha. Great update! :D