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I liked it. Update again! :D

This was intresting. I enjoyed it. Looking forward to finding out what happens next. And dream writing is always fun.

Junior's jealousy makes me 'awe'. I don't know why, but it does. Hahaa. I would feel bad if she turned down Zacky, because he's already so shy and whatnot around her. I think she should go on just one more date before making any hasty decisions. Plus, it would get Junior all worked up and that's always fun. Lol. I loved this! :)

I do have to agree that Arianna is the dumbest smart person. XD I still kind of hope she does go on a second date with Zack though because he's all kinds of cute. ^.^ Though I hope he didn't get scared off again when Junior started yelling at him. Kind of an asshole move by the way. I really really really want to know how long it'll take for either Arianna to figure out Junior's feelings or if he'll just tell her once he gets too fed up. Great update! :D

I just started reading this and I'm in love with it! Hahaa. I like that the story line is original and really ... unexpected. Lol. Zack's so adorable with his stuttering and 'Junior' being jealous is as well. I can't wait for more! :)

Sounds like Junior is getting jealous! lol

Such a cute update. Looking forward to more.

Zack's just so cute. I'm actually bummed it turned out to be a double date, Junior's idea I'm sure. And on top of that, he suggests he and Zack switch spots? I'm actually feeling mortified, and I'm not even part of it. XD I swear, he just needs to admit he likes her. Loved the update though. :)

Well, that date with Zack will be interesting for sure. He's just so adorable. ^.^ Great update. :)

I love love love this! Its different from what I've read before and I'm loving every word lol

Awesome! A date with Zack should be great and he does have very pretty eyes.

This quite interesting indeed. Very different and I like it. Keep it up.

WHY AM I SO GREAT AND OBLIVIOUS? XD

I just can't stop laughing at how oblivious she is. Too caught up with her crush to notice when someone likes her. But it was sweet how Junior, still feels so weird calling him that lol, came to her house to apologize. :) Great update. :)

I do so love how original this is. The dialogue is easy and the reading is easy. I wasn't sure about the crush on Brian Sr. but I like where this is going.

I don't know why you don't have any comments or more subscribers, because this is amazing! :D I'm just in love with the fact that she's not fawning over Brian, or Junior, but instead has this massive crush on his dad. And she's oblivious to how Junior feels. I'm just beyond excited to see how this will turn out.
Only one little complain would be that sometimes you put two different characters' dialouge in the same paragraph. So just make sure there's a new paragraph when another character talks, and you'll be good. :)