Frozen In Amber - Comments

  • swell

    swell (150)

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    Wow, this piece was amazing. I loved the simplicity of the ideas you had going on in this piece but it still drew me in. It was the perfect length, the layout and spelling/grammar was flawless, and the whole story just flowed really nicely. I can’t find anything to fault in this, this is really well done and I loved it. Thanks for entering!
    August 20th, 2012 at 11:26am
  • Audrey170

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    This is absolutely stunning. It's simple, being only 500 words, but at the same time it's a little complex. I found myself asking questions and wanting to know so much more about Lana. I also didn't find and grammatical errors, which is great because they annoy me to no end! Keep up the amazing writing!
    July 31st, 2012 at 05:45am
  • Rosabellee

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    I absolutely love everything about this! There is so much meaning in only 500 words. I love the layout, and the simplicity of it, as well as the photo.. it's so beautiful!
    Lovely
    xx
    July 29th, 2012 at 10:59pm