Trapped in an Elevator - Comments

I... really didn't like this, mainly because absurdist humor like this doesn't really work very well in a written format. Much prefer it in video format than a written format. Yeah, there was a couple of funny moments, especially considering that I know all the people here. Sill, even if the humor made me laugh, I would have problems following this considering the lack of appropriate spacing.

Overall, pretty meh on this story. Kind of fell flat for me for the most part, although you said it was your first story, which make sense. Feels like someone's first story. You've probably gotten baby since the years have gone by and I hope you continue to keep better.

I... really didn't like this, mainly because absurdist humor like this doesn't really work very well in a written format. Much prefer it in video format than a written format. Yeah, there was a couple of funny moments, especially considering that I know all the people here. Sill, even if the humor made me laugh, I would have problems following this considering the lack of appropriate spacing.

Overall, pretty meh on this story. Kind of fell flat for me for the most part, although you said it was your first story, which make sense. Feels like someone's first story. You've probably gotten baby since the years have gone by and I hope you continue to keep better.

Oh, the crack! I love this! It's so adorable! Hilarious, too. I'm reading this and my bf's just sitting here giving me a wtf look due to the laughter that this story causes. Well written :D

“SPEAK AGAIN AND I WILL DESTROY YOU!” I LOVE IT!! <3

I loved this. Especially because you've got this great mixture of musicians in here_ EXCLIDING BIEBER. I love when Billie Joe tells him to shut up and the others threaten to beat him with an pineapple. I just got visuals and this is hilarious! Very well written.

omg, i laughed through this whole thing!! this was super funny and really well written!!

only thing i would crit on is that Jared's hair wouldn't likely touch the ceiling coz he's actually really short xD

anyway, this is super funny, and i made an account for my gf just so she could read it xD

super super :)

That was a great piece of humor my friend. I enjoyed reading it, though to my disappointment I snorted milk all over my keyboard. Anyway, loved it! <3

I'm not going to lie, this was pretty funny. There were some little bits of sly joke that you threw in there among the more obvious random-factor funniness. "Took a turn for the amusingly ridiculous" (couldn't have said it better myself), "realising their silence was distinctly hostile," "blood, tears, and kiwi juice..."; that is my kind of humor, and I liked it. For a goofy, I-don't-want-to-think-or-feel-right-now read, this is not half bad. :)

I loved this stoey, it was fun and lighthearted.

I loved it! At first I wasn't entirely certain that I'd like it, because a lot of stories have "randomness" and "funny" in them, but only a few actually genuinely have it in the story. I loved it, and I love the characterizations, they were spot on. Definitely a must-read for a pick-me-up.

So fucking Hilarious
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I died reading this

I have to say that I love this, it is so funny!

Aww... Frank didn't kill him >< Haha, thanks for writing that story it made me laugh so hard xD
It was refreshing to read a story that was so... simple and fun, if you get what I mean?
Again, thanks, truly was wonderful to read :D

Haha I really enjoyed reading this story. I'm always up for a good comedy and this was right up my alley! I enjoyed the simplistic feel of this story and after reafing countless of depressing stories about death and despair (LOL) it was refreshing to read something light and uplifting.

Very nice, i'm super glad comment swap brought me to this.

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Don't know exactly what to say about this story. I don't exactly like comedies as much and this just seemed to be a joke more than a story or chapter or whatever it is that you wanted to portray. There were a couple of mistakes and a lot of over exaggerations that seemed immature to me. I don't like this at all. It was just one thing after another and random moments coming out of nowhere. Yea, so I just don't like this one bit.

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Haha, so original idea and a pretty funny comedy story, just remember the sentence spacing and small grammatical and spelling mistakes, but apart from that job well done :) I hope that you write more of these funny situations!

Keep writing! :) x

Nice story, mate

That was pretty funny. Made my day :) Thank you.