I loved this cuz its something i never saw coming so i think it would make an amazing story that is very original since im pretty sure NOBODY has put M.Shadows and Demi Lovato together before.
I really liked this story and i liked this pairing, because usually people choose more "rock'n'roll" type of girls for the guys and i also liked how nice Demi was even though the girls were cold to her. It would be really awesome if this was a full length story but hey you just posted this story so.. x] Anyway i really loved it!