Wow. This was incredible. Would expect nothing less from you though! This could be published! Really love your writing and always will!! Making me want to start again!!!
I'm honestly so pissed because I keep finding amazing stories and they're never finished/plan to be finished. So if you see this, from the bottom of my heart I am asking you to continue this
wow, I really liked this. I don't know how I missed it before! Glad I found it though. I love the Dom/sub stuff, its erotic, and when it features the guys from Avenged it has me hook, line and sinker. so damn hot, great writing!
I love it and i really hope you get ideas, because I think this is good it's not just about the dom stuff its about how they actually had something else and now that he is hers, it's like an added bonus. -S
Oh my goodness, this was one of your most amazing short stories!!! I can't wait till you think of something to add because i know it will be amazing! <3 Michele
omg yeah. that was drool worthy. smoking hot. i need a new shower! gosh i love matt all dominant and stuff :b you write him so well like that hehehe. hope ideas come to mine for this! we'll brainstorm :D
Aw thanks. I’m actually surprised I used to write so well. You should write again! I miss it!