Beg Plead Scream - Comments

I was actually just looking for smut. I ADMIT IT, OKAY? I was in that mood, haha.

I was a bit...surprised at first, really. Like, I really wasn't ready for any of what followed, but when I started reading I started to imagine hundreds of different scenarios...haha, but none of them where actually right. I liked the start into this story a lot. The mystery, it set the mood just right and I think that worked amazingly, on me anway.

At first I just liked them, I thought they were cute.

AND THEN YOU DROPPED THAT FUCKING BOMB ON ME

I like this kind of stuff. Like...murderers and crime and drama and shit, so of course I got into this really quickly. And I found that I really liked what you'd come up with, with her planning to kill him and him having known for so long. And how she kept trying not to be intimidated while he was putting his ego even higher than I think it already was
I was a tiny bit shocked by what followed. Okay, not really shocked, but I wasn't really expecting it all that way, but it was so much fun to read, So intense! It created an amazing atmosphere. Him being so aggressive, and her running off, and him chasing right after her. Amazing!

Well the buttsex was really fitting into everything that was going on. I would not necessarily say it was hot. But it fitted really well and you chose great words for the scene, to have it come across as dramatic and dark as it was supposed to be.

I'd be lying if I said the rest wasn't hot though. Oh and the previous part with him enjoying some on-mouth time. Hot dayum. You write smut incredible well and you're really fucking kinky, girl. But like...in a good way, hehe.

I had seen it coming. I had, and I kept hoping I was wrong. The moment I thought that maybe it was all just a roleplay I so hoped it wouldn't be, kind of! I guess personally I would have liked it better. But I still don't want to say I didn't like the ending. It was a nice, well planned plot twist, that eased a lot of tension and made the story a lot less cruel. I'm not very sensitive about cruelty though, not when it comes to fictional violence anyway. But if this hadn't of been a roleplay, it wouldn't have been as hot as it was, and was daring, kind of. Because once that was revealed, you look at it differently.

Great work babes! I wasn't expecting anything bad anyway, hehe.

PQP. Que foda! Realmente achei que Matt a mataria D:

Oh man did not expect that! Haha i love the hot kinky matt and even better when nice sweet matt came at the end (: smuttacular! Best iv read (:

Damn, I was actually kind of excited for him to kill her....
I am a sick person :x
I loved it though, it was awesome:)

Holy shit, I thought that was real until that last part came! :o
This was freaking awesome! I loved everything about it!

I loved this so much I just had to read and comment again, seriously phenomenal work hon! =)

Really loved this

ohh yes I very much enjoyed this ;) great job

Um...yeah...*dies from the hotness*

That was awesome.. I had a inkling it was a role play! One of the best I've read!

wow that was awesome! i had a feeling it was role play and i was right :D this was smoking hot, and done tastefully!

Me gusta mamacita! Fucking loved it! You did an awesome job :D

that was great!

Ho.ly.shit!! So im pretty much speechless now because that was hands down the best smut ive read lol. I loved every single second of this the role play was genius, the rough sex was drool worthy and Matt was just a beast from beginning to end lol. Im pretty damn sure I need a cold shower, new ovaries and a panty change haha. Fantastic job hon, I bow down! lol =) <3