Sticks and Stones - Comments

this is so amazing! i'm literally bawling this is soooo sad!:( it's sad but so perfectly written.

This is one of the best stories I have ever read. Sad but perfection!!

Everything about this is amazing.
The layout perfectly fits and is amazing itself, the story itself... wow. Really intense, but it definitely show the reality of what bullying can do and has done.
I'm tempted to change my username after reading this line, it was just... so accurate to how people like Max and his friends are depicted:
'They were the unworthy ones; the outcasts.'
The Unworthy Ones... wow. That's what I'm tempted to change my username to. lol. If not on here, I might use it some time on some other site. Such a bold and compelling line; first time I've heard it. Permission granted, I hope? ;) That may even make a good story title.
This whole story was just amazing. Amazing job with it, and speaking out and writing something about it... it takes courage just to write about something like this and confront it, and I'm glad you did. It'll put a realization to anyone who's been like that.
Bullying is cruel and... I'm glad that you made the main character get the courage to stand up and confront all of those people. People should do that more often in schools; talk about how serious bullying can be.
I can't say enough how amazing this is. Amazing can't even describe it; it deserves much more than that, a lot more credit.
Great job. :)

I have no idea who Max Green is, but I love this story! It's so emotional and I agree with LooksthatkillA7X, maybe if teens in high schools read this, something could change. As a victim of bullying myself, this almost made me cry, and I don't tear up that often. People need to read this. Everywhere in the world. Beautiful piece of writing, you're amazing.

When I realized you wrote this extraordinary oneshot. I must tell you, youare a true writer. If this could be published for teens to read it through out the schools it may actually change something. I honestly cried when I read this, because I know what is like to be tormented. and it truly sucks. this is amazing and I hope this gets the word out that bullying is wrong.

I almost cried reading this, there is so much emotion and detail, you're a great writer. Thank you for writing this, more people need to understand how words can truly hurt others. This has such a powerful message and i will definatly recomend it to my friends who have experienced bullying first hand. Simply amazing

I almost cried reading this, there is so much emotion and detail, you're a great writer. Thank you for writing this, more people need to understand how words can truly hurt others. Simply amazing.

This was a beautiful sad story, beautiful becuz there was someone who stood up for Max which was his best friend Victoria and sad becuz of the fact tht he killed himself becuz of some dumb fake ass bitch, love this story :)

Thank you so much for writing this.

When Victoria started to talk I literally started to tear up and when she got to the video that Max made, I just cried! His last words just unleashed a lot of emotions! This is beautifully written and just so much emotions in it! I love it!

I quite literally cried while reading this. Beautifully written, and just... Incredible. That's the only word to describe this.

Simply Incredible. That's all I can say. This left me speechless.

I literally SOBBED while reading this. I still have tears in my eyes. You did an unbelievable job at getting the real feelings across. This was incredible. Thank you for writing this. More people need to understand how bad words hurt.

I don't know or listen to Escape the Fate, so I read this story as if it were an original...but wow...you really know how to tear at the heart strings. Not just tug at them but completely rip them out. I don't even really know what to say. It really has such a powerful message and all I can say is well done. Well done.

This is so... heartbreaking. You really brought tears to my eyes. I've been lucky enough to not have to deal with bullies. It shocks me to hear about it and sometimes it's hard to believe it really happens. I cannot for the life of me understand why a person would do harm to others verbally and physically. It doesn't make them better or stronger. It just makes them fools. Anyway, this was so sad, and you are just a brilliant writer.

Holy shit, this made me cry. This is fantastic.