Wow, this was fab! It's ronnie radke., btw. I'm finally getting my lazy ass around to judging this contest and I apologize for any pissy feelings you might have towards me for taking so long.
- 5 / 5 for custom layout. - 5 / 5 for grammar. - 9 / 10 for using the song in an interesting way! Definitely didn't expect anything like this, and that was great. - 5 / 5 for interest factor.
bonus +1 for making it seem like this could continue on as a full length story (which would be faaaaaabulous.) +2 for the unexpected twist of it involving demons and cool nifty stuff like that!