Try to Scream - Comments

@ Eclare
awesome! i will so check it out! thx 4 the reply! :)

@ starfish_angel
That is true. I didn't bring anything from Niall into after he shot the man. The idea behind it, is he doesn't get for doing other than self defense. He's also not a sociopath, it's just, his after story isn't there. He's as bad off as Munro. But he's trying to help her and not worry much about himself.

I have thought about it and I know I should have said something, but he's in a mindset right now that he did it to save her. It wouldn't be until later on (the way I've designed his character in this story) that he truly does break. That is at least a few years. It would be off to do a time skip that far down the road. Yes, I could have done the epilogue that way, but it was designed to give a little more insight to Trent and how Munro is dealing.

Niall isn't the main character, he's a big part of it, but he's simply a supporting character.

I really like this story and I am sad that it's finished, but I am a little disappointed that you didn't deal at all with the fact that Niall killed a man. Basically you turned Niall into a sociopath; he killed a man and didn't have any emotional response or psychological trauma. I realise that you didn't want to continue this story further, but I feel that some insight into Niall's mindset following the murder is necessary to truly give this story closure.

@ hollybear
I'm glad you like it. I promise to try to update by tonight or tomorrow. I can't promise it will happen, but I WILL work on TRYING to make it happen.

@ Grumpy Cat
As much as I love the story, a sequel might not work. I want it to, but I can't see myself stressing though trying to make it happen. I am working on something knew with a few others. If you want to check that out. It's not started yet, but it will be coming soon :) The Play Book

update soooooooon! r u gonna make a sequel? maybe trent can like not die and in the sequel he comes back! i dunno just sayin.

Oh my goddddd I've missed so much!! This is so intense. I hope he finds her D:

@ oh but darling
Do I? Yay! I'm glad.

Thank you, hopefully when it ends, you will continue to feel the same way. :) ♥

I love it! I like how you can connect with fangirls and your characters x

Ahhh come on niall go get your girl!!! D:

Ah! That chapter was heartbreaking :( you write Niall very sell. Can't wait for more!

@ hollywood .
Awwww, thank you, love! That makes me so happy :) I'll update soon. Niall is easier to write than Munro at the moment. There isn't much to go on with her.

So, I read this entire story in a day, and I have to say, it's like nothing I've read before! It's absolutely amazing so far and I cannot wait to see where you go with this and what happens with Trent. Keep up the amazing work and PLEASE update soon. Subscribed and recommended.

@ strawberrybubble
I agree. He's nice, he's just a bit...messed up.

I know im not supposed to but i sorta like trent. obviously he has a few screws loose but i like him anyways...

this is good, more soon please :)

Please update soon i can't wait to see what happens next.

Please update soon i can't wait to see what happens next.

Oh my lord!! You need to update soon! So excited!

PLEASE UPDATE I LOVE IT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Ooh plot twist!!
Can't wait for the next chapter.
I love this story <3