Your story has a lot of mixed emotion it. It gives it a realistic view into her life. I loved how you use the poems to show how Cate feels throughout the story. To me it gives the story more feeling and a better understanding of Cate herself. I was glad that after all the horrible things that she went through, there was a moment in the end showing the sun begging to shine even with the death of Declan. In all, I really liked your story. You did a good job.
October 8th, 2014 at 08:44am