Bowties Are Cool! - Comments

Thanks, I know some people don't like this story that much so i'm happy you like it! may write another short story now that the ponds have..... well.

Okay, I'm just about to begin reading this, but the simple fact that this EXISTS just made my life. I love you for writing this. Thank you for mashing my fandoms.

@ TayFreak
I'm sorry.... i do have ourble with speeling anmd take class in school to help it. I'm not going to go true the whole story and edited it for yoursake, so sorry

okay, this could be an amazing story but i cant read past the first chapter. The dialogue is wooden and the grammar and spelling is awful.
Example: pressing all manner of button. ‘Now where is the thing-ma-bob got to now,’ i said to now one

It should be: pressing all manner of buttons. ‘Now where did the thing-ma-bob get to now,’ I said to no-one

I think with slight adjustments this could be a really great story; but please, for my sanity spell check!!

@ Lithium_Sorrows
no problem, dear! it's a great start, I can't wait to see where it goes! :)

@ cakecoffeeandzombies
Thank for the advice, this was one of the first stories i ever wrote and i did write it in a notebook so :/

Hello! So, this story consists of two of my very favorite things- Dr. Who and My Chem-so I was super pumped to read it. I like the way it's progressing, through spontaneous meetings, and your characterization of the Doctor is adorable. However, there are some grammar issues, such as "there a...nasty aftertaste to it" would be 'there is a...nasty aftertaste to it' and so on. This happened multiple times, so be careful of it in the future. All in all, I think this story has a lotvod potential! Good luck!

hahaha i love Mr and Mrs Doctor and rivers reaction to it

i really like this story so far will you update soon?

i love t he update and yea the Doctor does have some of the best quotes

oh please update it looks interesting and i as well like mcr and doctor who

Oh my god, two of my favourite things! Doctor Who and My Chemical Romance!! I look forward to your updates :)