The Silly Things - Comments

I love this so much that I've posted it on my personal Facebook and the pages that I am admin. I think it's so good! I've recommended and subscribed because I'll definitely want to read it again :3

Just in case you don't believe me and just so you can see it isn't being pulled off as my own work:
https://www.facebook.com/pages/Kurt-Cobain/155768227784712
https://www.facebook.com/YourLittleDayMaker

I love the layout too, it's, everything about this is just perfect.

From comment swap, and this is such a sweet little drabble. It's not very long--and it doesn't need to be. I like that it's just about quirks and foibles that people have, and how they can be endearing in a relationship and how being with a person can rub off on you. Sometimes, that’s really all you need.

I agree with the comment below; this reads more like prose poetry than a drabble. It is very cute and easy to relate to for me as I have done things like you wrote about for love. The last line is perfect, and it wraps this piece up nicely; it really exemplifies the feelings behind the actions, I guess. I like it.

The title should be "The Silly Things" instead of "The silly things." due to capitalization and punctuation rules. Other than that I didn't catch any other errors. The layout is nice, and the banner fits what you've written. Great job!

Sent here by comment swap. :) It's very short. I think it might work better as a poem. The subject is cute. I totally know about coming up with strange things at 11 o'clock. Only for me it's more like 2 o'clock in the morning. Haha. Anyways. You seem like a good writer. :) Keep it up! :3