Like Lovers Do - Comments

Hi. I like this.
Anyway, your summary is a great attention-getter and most of the time, if a story has more than four chapters already posted I get discouraged. After reading your first chapter, I can't wait to read more. You capture the jealous ex-girlfriend really, really well. I can't wait to see how the romance between the main guy and the Christian girl progresses. She seems sweet and very easy to look up to.
I'm totally gonna read the rest of this and subscribe. Keep up the great work!
PS: I LOVED a walk to remember. My standards are now set :P

Comment swapperino!
I'm not a fan of romance, but this story is wonderful. Although the plot I would instantly read, I was pleasantly surprised by your wonderful writing style. I love how this is actually about religion, we don't see those a lot here on mibba. Really good so far, please continue

I was actually going to read this story earlier, but I ended up not having time. I'm glad comment swap brought me here though, I love this story so far.

I really liked the title and the summary. I think the summary provided just enough insight to know a bit about the story but not enough so I felt like I read the story already.

The first two chapters were short but sweet. I love how you made religion the thing that seperates them, you don't often see that on here. It gave off a very A Walk to Remmeber-y vibe, and I got excited when you said that's what inspired it, hahah.

I'm defikitely excited to read more, amazing job!

Well, that was really different. I was brought here from comment swap and I'm glad I did.
That was a nice and fresh start. Your characters are brought up really well. Your story is really great so keep it up and don't make me wait too long for another chapter of your interesing imagination. I can't wait to see where you take this. :)

My vote is for Guinevere! I love the name and the last chapter made me even more intrigued in her! :-) And it was so nice of you to thank me in your author's note <3 Keep writing, I am ever-anxious to continue reading!

I think it's a good start. I'm interest in reading more about Marie and Andy. They're my two favorite. The other ones are interesting to me. lol. I think having a lot of characters can be good and bad sometimes. Especially if there isn't a real description of the characters themselves, but I think that you have balanced it well though. I'm not big on religion but I still think that your story is good. Keep up the good work. ^^

I really like this. I think your characters are well delvolped and put together exclely. I think you have a good idea and im really glad comment swap brought me here. and you should for sure keep writing great storys like this.

I love this :) I'm glad comment swap brought me here. Your layout is so pretty and your intro caught my attention immediately. Although, while reading the summary I thought it would be cliche but I still love it anyway! :D I think it's because of the religious/non-religious couple-ish kind of thing (I hope that made sense xD).

There were no grammar errors that I found so great job on that. I can't wait for more! Please update soon! :D

Im sorry but I think youre straying from the actual plot (love story) because youre using all of the characters. I mean i still love the story but i feel like its becoming more of multiple stories within a story rather than a love story with different narrators making the relationship of the two flow. Either way keep updating..

Your story is really intriguing; I was caught from the summary page, which although cliche, makes me totally want to read it. I think that on Mibba, the more cliche a story is, the better - if I was looking for thorough stories with incredible depth, I would read a real novel! ;)

The detail is great, and I love your characters! Keep writing!

I love it! Now they just have to hang out haha because thatll tooootally happen while she thinks God is testing her. Keep up the good work. xx

I was lucky enough to get this story from the comment swap today. As soon as I clicked on it and saw your pretty layout, I knew that I was going to enjoy this story. I've only just started reading it, but I already like it a lot! Your prologue totally reminded me of A Walk To Remember, but that's a good thing! I adore that movie! (:

I really liked how you started the story off. It was really great detail and it drew me in right away. It was a short and sweet beginning, but I liked that. A quick read, but it gives the reader just enough to crave more. That's a really good technique to have as a writer, and lucky for you, it seems you've got quite the talent with it.

Amy is probably not going to be a favorite character of mine, I can already tell. Her not wanting to "share" him sort of just sounded... wrong. Like I get that they have an on and off relationship but if it's currently off, she has no right to come at him like that.

But I really like the main character so much. Andy. It reminds me of a really cute guy that I went to school with so, I'm probably going to keep picturing him as I read this, haha!

The point of this comment is that I really enjoyed the beginning of this and I will absolutely be reading farther. (:

From Comment Swap~

Wow! Just judging by the layout and summary, I can tell that I’m going to devour this story. I’m already in love with it; truthfully, I’ve never read anything like this before – except for A Walk to Remember, which you mentioned at the end of the first chapter -- and I’m super excited to see how this masterpiece turns out (:

I must say, you have a gorgeous, elegant way of describing things; I absolutely love that. The descriptions of the trees, the characters – everything about this is freakin’ perfect in its own amazing way. Most of all I happen to love Anderson so far; I like how you mention that he doesn’t speak often, but when he does, he does so to sting and hurt. From what I can tell so far, he’s a very unique character and I’m anxious to see more of him in future chapters! I’m not too fond of Amy; she seems like one of those mean-from-the-start kind of characters that’s somehow in every story. And Marie. Marie is adorable. I like that she sticks with her faith without shoving it down people’s throats. Love it!

I really enjoyed what I’ve read so far. I’m definitely subbing and reccing this, as it deserves much more love than it has now, and I’ll be sure to come back later to read more. Awesome job (: <3

I love your description of Anderson (or Andy)! Not many guys are so quiet and shy but this guy seems sweet! And Dave seems like a great comic relief, I like how you integrated him in and shed some pale light on Anderson's character for having such goofy friends, otherwise he has a bit of sadness to him (or maybe that's just me feeling sad for him).
His disinterest in Amy also amuses me (mainly because she seems like a total female dog) ;)
Great job, it feels like I'm reading a professional novel online.

i love the characters of this story. She uses religion in a beautiful way rather than shoving it everyones throat and hating everyone else. Please update soon. I want them to talk or flirt or something.. But i really enjoy this story. Keep up the good work.

This story is interesting, I like how she thinks about religion naturally and it flows. Also some touch ups might be good in the first chapter. It wasn't clear what exactly thee object of interest was or what they were talking about.

Also, I have a huge warning. Maybe it's just my own nerve stinger, but still I'm saying it, avoid cliches! Sometimes cliches can get people to come to a story because it's something familiar to latch on to, but it can also get them skimming skipping down the page to see what happens.

However, your story is unique, and so far I've been reading every singly word.

Also, it was really funny that you pointed out her calculating behaviour. It also added to the flow!

Keep on writing!

Here from comment swap.

I'm loving this. First chapter, and it drew me in. Your description was lovely, and the character development really showed in this chapter, and I like that. I find this idea intriguing, which I why I'll subscribe and recommend.

Please keep writing because this story has a lot of potential !
:)

lol oops just read the little blurb at the bottom! :D

lol oops just read the little blurb at the bottom! :D

lol oops just read the little blurb at the bottom! :D