September 23rd, 2014 at 05:50am
comment swap .... sorry but this story is not good it is very good.... amazing details, love the title and the pic for chapter 1!!! comment swap has done something very amazing, it told me to comment on this story. but this story is just so good that I have read it many times... again and again.. many girls think that guys don't like them because they are fat and ugly but the thing that really matters is what is inside of you, right???
amazing work!!! keep up the good work.. I am gonna read more stories by this author and I recommend this story....
AWWESSSSOMME!!!!!!
LOVE ROMANTIC STORIES!!! YOU HAVE JUST MADE MY DAY!! I BET YOU WILL MAKE OTHER PEOPLE'S DAY AS WELL!!
ya , about the layout... the letters are a bit big you know.... please change them
anyways good overall!!!!!!!!!
The story itself is quite good though. The emotions are strong and well felt. However the text is quite big, but layout is fine. I really like your ability to describe the characters emotions. You did a really nice job on this story. It is not really the type of story I like to enjoy but it is good and I'm sure there are a lot of readers that do love this type of story and would absolutely love this.