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Ooooooh I like it! Your main character isn't necessarily likable because she's so needy and nearly cried because her boyfriend wouldn't tell her she was beautiful. However, she DOES sound incredibly beautiful, and from the photo on the summary, she certainly is. A suggestion I have to you for your story is to just run a spell check and read over your story before you post it. There were a few errors I spotted, but they didn't really distract from the story. Things that could easily be spell checked to fix. :-)

I'm not sure where your story is going, but I'm interested!

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Im not really sure what to think of her after reading this, she doesn't seem like a nice person but she also seems like she could be lovely. I dont really now what you want the reader to think of her, but I still enjoyed it, I may subscribe just to see where this goes, Well done anyway, it has the potential to be a really good story x