Charmed & Enthralled. - Comments

  • the adventure.

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    @ la dispute.
    aw thanks girl! makin' me blush over here haha
    January 16th, 2013 at 07:09pm
  • la dispute.

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    Your writing is so perfect, I literally am just sitting here in jealousy. Hahaa.
    On to the story, this was amazing and I loved it. I nearly teared up as it went on, because it was just so emotional. I loved the little moment between Emma and Aria, it was adorable, and how John reassured her that he'd always love her - no matter what age may bring. Gahh. The fact that she died days after he did, nearly killed me. Your details and ability to make stories seem so realistic never cease to amaze me, dude! :)
    January 16th, 2013 at 09:20am
  • vices

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    ARIA
    LUCY
    I C WAT U DID THUR
    DON'T THINK I MISSED IT ;D
    PLL 4LYF.<3

    but anywho ASDKJFHASLKJCHLAKJWEHDFLKJASHDFLKJAHSLK AWWWWWWWWWWWWWH THAT WAS SO CUTE HOLY SHIT
    I WANNA CRY
    John, growing old and dying :'c
    ACK BUT THIS WAS SO SWEET AND CHEESY AND IT WAS PERF.<3
    August 11th, 2012 at 02:10am
  • thescenekid

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    bittersweet!!! i super loved it :) :)
    August 9th, 2012 at 08:20pm
  • selfish machine;

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    Oh my God, this was the cutest thing! It was really well-written and the way you sectioned it off into different memories was fantastic. It even made me tear up a bit, towards the end. Good luck in the contest! (:
    August 9th, 2012 at 04:46am