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  • hellsbelle

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    THIS IS FUCKING BRILLIANT
    September 8th, 2012 at 11:05pm
  • All_Fun_And_Games

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    oh no D: it starting to be sad and mean but I still love this so so so much :3 your ssuuuch an amazing writer yo uhave no idea how amazing it is to read your stuff :O x
    September 7th, 2012 at 02:41pm
  • jesus christ.

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    holy God, this is so so so so so glorious. i just read all of it in probably less than five minutes, and i want more. soon, preferably. i adore this. it's amazing, i can't get enough of the way you write. your flow and your descriptions, and your characters. this is amazing. unff. <3
    September 5th, 2012 at 05:09am
  • boyking

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    "Being in love with her was like drowning without any chance of making it." this story's great and fuck what a great line
    September 5th, 2012 at 02:30am
  • ThatKidNamedCarson

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    the fact that this is amazingly written and the chapters are short make this like the best thing and the worst thing ever. please update soon. :)
    September 5th, 2012 at 12:41am
  • kahlo

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    ASDKFVJSDKFHSDFD
    why is this so perfect
    i demand an explanation
    or an update
    an update sounds better
    and yeah you just updated right now
    BUT IF YOU DID IT REASONABLY SOON I'D DIE OF HAPPINESS
    just uh
    sayin'~
    keep up the good work, darlin' c:
    September 4th, 2012 at 11:45pm
  • foureyesandalibis

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    The story so far seems cool, i'd like to hear more
    September 4th, 2012 at 09:02am
  • KaitlinandCompany

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    Ah-may-zing. Completely stunning. The writing is beautiful and the fact that the narrator is a girl makes it waaaay more interesting than someof the other Dead Girl & Narrator She Loved stories.
    (By the way, have you listened to Carmen by Lana Del Rey? It just reminds me of this story every time I listen to it.)
    August 28th, 2012 at 05:00am
  • All_Fun_And_Games

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    Wow :O : love it, nomnomnom <3
    August 27th, 2012 at 05:41pm
  • silk tea.

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    Duuude, I didn't know the story teller was a girl! Oh that just made this story a million times more interesting.
    August 25th, 2012 at 08:06pm
  • pawnsinplay

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    Oh.

    And this is why I love this story. And your writing. Absolutely flawless. <3
    August 24th, 2012 at 04:32pm
  • cloud nymph

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    Oh so fucking powerful. I grip onto every word. You're my favorite writer out of them all. You're better than Pike for me. I mean, if you don't include the lush Tam from that. He's perfect on a whole different level. .... Mm. Faerie Sentry Pretend-to-be-Human emerald eyed kisses for you. <3
    August 24th, 2012 at 06:09am
  • silk tea.

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    I really love this. The short chapters and the way it's written is marvelous. At first I thought maybe the narrator was like Bambi's best friend or something but I like that it was someone she fell in love with. I'm really curious to see how she died and why it happened.
    August 23rd, 2012 at 12:23am
  • All_Fun_And_Games

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    I love this :3 Cant wait to read more :D yay :D x
    August 20th, 2012 at 10:36am
  • aquaria.

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    I really love this so far.
    I don't know why, but that analogy with the ice water was brilliant to me. Wow. It'll probably stay in my head for a while.
    Update! (:
    August 20th, 2012 at 02:04am
  • pawnsinplay

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    OH! Well. This just got even better <3
    August 20th, 2012 at 12:24am
  • ImJustLaya

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    I really like this. It's so different.

    And sorry... I am one of those silent readers... "/
    August 19th, 2012 at 09:16pm
  • lucky luciano

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    I love this. It's great. You're writing is amazing, the layout is amazing, the whole story itself is amazing. Great job!
    August 19th, 2012 at 08:13pm
  • INACTIVExx

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    I love this and I am so doing a review on it!! :B
    August 17th, 2012 at 11:42pm
  • Disenchanted Lullaby

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    I love your writing so much Very Happy
    August 17th, 2012 at 11:35pm