oh no D: it starting to be sad and mean but I still love this so so so much :3 your ssuuuch an amazing writer yo uhave no idea how amazing it is to read your stuff :O x
holy God, this is so so so so so glorious. i just read all of it in probably less than five minutes, and i want more. soon, preferably. i adore this. it's amazing, i can't get enough of the way you write. your flow and your descriptions, and your characters. this is amazing. unff. <3
ASDKFVJSDKFHSDFD why is this so perfect i demand an explanation or an update an update sounds better and yeah you just updated right now BUT IF YOU DID IT REASONABLY SOON I'D DIE OF HAPPINESS just uh sayin'~ keep up the good work, darlin' c:
Ah-may-zing. Completely stunning. The writing is beautiful and the fact that the narrator is a girl makes it waaaay more interesting than someof the other Dead Girl & Narrator She Loved stories. (By the way, have you listened to Carmen by Lana Del Rey? It just reminds me of this story every time I listen to it.)
Oh so fucking powerful. I grip onto every word. You're my favorite writer out of them all. You're better than Pike for me. I mean, if you don't include the lush Tam from that. He's perfect on a whole different level. .... Mm. Faerie Sentry Pretend-to-be-Human emerald eyed kisses for you. <3
I really love this. The short chapters and the way it's written is marvelous. At first I thought maybe the narrator was like Bambi's best friend or something but I like that it was someone she fell in love with. I'm really curious to see how she died and why it happened.
I really love this so far. I don't know why, but that analogy with the ice water was brilliant to me. Wow. It'll probably stay in my head for a while. Update! (: