Dare To Believe - Comments

Ahhhhhhhhhh. I am so happy comment swap brought me here. Your layout is effing beautiful and simple and to top it all off we have a story about THE Prince Harry. I have a weakness for ginger boys. I love all of this, I like how Kaitlin acts when she first meets him with thinking that he is going to try and mug her and of course Harry is as charming as ever. I died when she called him ‘Ginger nut.’ The only suggestion I would have would be to space our your chapters and dialogue a bit more so it’s easier to read. Still love it thoughhh. :) You need to update this again asapppppp.

Can you update this? :)

I think you have a great story going on here I cant wait to read what happens next. please update soon. thank you :)

Great story, you're such a good writer! Update soon please!! =)

Very nice. I love your style of writing :D

Love this story, please update soon!

Comment swap.
I'm kind of annoyed that the dialoug was mixed with the paragraphs, just a pet peeve I have nothing personal. I don't think you need to change it for my sake. I found a few types but nothing too horrifying. I like your style and the way you write, descriptions are good. The layout isn't somehthing I usually bother with and I don't think it's really important. But it's good some times I get layouts that are too flashy but yours is quite pleasing. I enjoyed reading this and good luck with it =)

You are incredible writer,hun!(; i really enjoy to go to the next page and caught many surprises there...good job,keep it up(:

I was sent here from ye old Commemt swap! ARRR...

I really loved your style of writing. It was lovely and had a certain almost old world feel to it. It fits the piece perfectly. Your characters are charming and I love their interactions.
Katitlin has a great personality and although I don't useally like stories like this I must say it's been lovely to read it.

I think you are a great writer and this is a really great story. Keep up the good work and I may even keep reading.

Your style is wonderful, it's so nice to read something a bit more fresh! A little proof reading wouldn't go astray, but I think we are all guilty of a few typos.
Otherwise I think you've done a stand up job here! The only real complaint is that it didn't go on for a little longer, haha.

Sent here by comment swap. This is the first story I have read about the royal family. I found your story well done.. I love how you made Katitlin's personality. The clifhanger was a good touch but, it made me sad because, I wanted more lol. Please update soon.

oh heads up. you wrote 'could' instead of 'cold' when Harry asks if she's cold in chapter 5 :)
Nice update though :D made me smile

i really like this!!please update!

great chapter.
It is a little short, but longer than before so... haha

This put a smile on my face; your style of writing is good.
The only thing that seemed unbelievable is that she left her friend there. It's a girls rule; no woman get's left behind, so unless she knew for sure her mate had left... I don't know, that was the only thing.

Good story though.

love this please continue! <3

I can't wait to see what Harry does about letting her get away. I love it. PMS!!!

I'm liking this so far. I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. PMS