Two Left Feet - Comments

This is absolutely so sweet. I love this and its simplicity. Dancing on a roof sounds absolutely beautiful, especially when you're with someone who doesn't care if you can dance well. I can just imagine the beautiful night sky, and the city lights, soft music and the laughter of dancing with someone close to you. I was never a good dancer myself, but you sparked a new dream inside of me to dance on a roof top with someone like that!

I honestly wish I could write a piece like this, that was short and so very sweet and had this lasting feeling inside of me.

Oh wow, wow wow wow! This was so sweet, short, and amazing! I find that simple things like these are always the best stories. They really are. Hi I was brought here via comment swap! I love the relationship the girl and her brother have. The ballet thing...oh God, I remember wanting to do it, and then I learned what en pointe was. Nope!

But really this story was beautiful, there was nothing really wrong with it, and it just flowed so nicely. Great poem too, by the way. I've recommended it. Take care darling and don't give up writing, you're great at it! :]

Omg. This is so lovely. I love the relationship between the siblings and how they were such good friends. I adore your prose and how it's simple and elegant. It gives beautiful imagery. I was just so happy as I read it. You did the whole "two left feet" idea wonderfully in such a small amount of words. I'm very wordy, so I truly admire people who get it out quicker, without any amount of amazing...ness lost. Lol. This was truly awesome and adorable. <3

Hello! I'm from comment swap!

I really enjoyed your story. Your sentances flowed perfectly, your words were grammaticly correct and I love your writing style. It is all just wonderful.

I felt that your picture in your layout did not fit since it was hands when your story was about feet. I also thought that the layout was a bit plain. It all depends on what the contest asked for anyway.

There really is nothing to critique about in your writing because it was done so well.

Amazing Job, I recomend this!

That was so adorable and so amazing, and reading this made me feel so fantastically happy. It was beautiful.