Heaven Help Us Now. - Comments

  • tedted5

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    Hallo!
    I am super late on commenting on this but hey, at least you know that someone out there is still reading this XD
    Since this has the Joker in it I think I fell in love with it from the beginning, (he is totally my favorite villain)
    Anyways! This story, so far, has a great story line. The thing I liked the best would have to be the main characters personality. I'm not sure of the word but I think it would be feisty or strong. I feel like her and the joker clash yet get along so well :) Make sure to keep this goin' and not give up!
    March 4th, 2014 at 05:22am
  • Sophia Bush;

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    It's a very interesting plot. What really adds to it is the fact that it's got The Joker in it! I actually hit recommend like half-way through the first chapter. This is absolutely amazing, hon. I can't wait for more! Keep it going!
    And I do hope you do more from the Joker's point of view too. It's always fun to know what's going on in his crazed head.
    April 18th, 2013 at 03:47pm
  • S a m .

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    Comment Swap!

    I love love love this! Its so fresh and funny. I adore the Joker and his... erm, strange tendencies. You have written his character well and I like Delilah. Her strive to stay alive (that rhymed) is impressive... I want to use a better word but I can't think of one.

    I can't remember if I found any mistakes with grammar or spelling.. so honestly just go back and read it yourself. Improvements can always be made :)
    November 12th, 2012 at 11:03am
  • shesmywynonna

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    I love how they are both equally matched in combat despite weapons and gender roles. They're cute together :)
    Update sooN!
    August 27th, 2012 at 11:21pm
  • shesmywynonna

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    I was sent here from comment swap and I was intrigued by the MCR title and thought it'd be that, but I was wrong. I'm not a big fan of Batman and dont know much about it, but I really like this story! I didnt catch any sentence fragments or misspellings which made me happy. Over all I'm really liking this story and plan to subscribe to it! Keep up the good work!! :D
    August 21st, 2012 at 08:34pm
  • bittersweet_scene

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    This is a really great story! I'm glad the comment swap brought me here. Honestly at first, I wasn't too sure about reading mainly because I'm not really a joker person, but really glad I did. Yeah I got freaked out as soon as the layout loaded but it was worth the temporary scare haha. You're character is such a strong person, and I really like how you made her that way. I'm definitely looking to read more so please keep up with the updates!
    August 20th, 2012 at 05:00pm
  • Laobows!

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    I'm going to be honest, when I first received this story I didn't want to read it. I'm not a joker fan or ever read a joker story. But! I really enjoyed this story. I love how Delilah and the Joker interact with each other and I can tell its only going to get better. I can't wait to read the rest of the story! Keep up the great work :)
    August 19th, 2012 at 04:04am
  • FixTheBrokenPieces

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    Hey dear! Comment swap sent me here!
    I can't decide if I'm glad or not..I mean, I love your story to death, but I'm also deathly afraid of clowns and I saw the pictures above your summary and almost had a heart attack. >.> Okay, maybe not. It did scare the crap out of me, though!
    You're main character rocks, and she's a role model to every woman out there. I wish I was a good knife thrower....Anyway, you have a lot of foreshadowing which I like because it makes me want to read more. I think I'll keep reading this. Nice job!
    August 17th, 2012 at 06:17am
  • ShanaeNayy

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    Fantastic. Fantastic. Fantastic. I love this story so far, I devoured your chapters thus far. I love the action in this story, it's a rare find for me. I constantly see strong female characters, but hardly any badass enough to actually fight and handle weapons. I like how the Joker's point of view is included, that he has emotions outside of just being crazy. One thing that I don't like is the constant reference to thee reader. You put in some things as if she's talking to us, but it isn't set up like that in the beginning. I hope that makes sense. Anyway, this story if off to a great start and I can't wait for more. Subscribed and recommended.
    August 17th, 2012 at 05:33am
  • inuyasha1618

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    JOKER FANFICTION: THANK YOU COMMENT SWAP! I'm curious if you just got this inspiration from the movie or if you read the comics as well. Anyway, the story is very interesting. There are some punctuation mistakes, namely with commas and spacing, but the story is still good. :)
    August 17th, 2012 at 05:29am
  • AcklesObsession

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    Ello'! I'm here from thee comment swap. I was pretty shocked to see someone do a fan-fiction about the joker. I haven't seen it before. The first chapter was freaking awesome! It had me hooked at once. Definitely going to keep reading(: Awesome job!
    August 17th, 2012 at 12:02am
  • china-doll

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    Well helloooo, I'm here from comment swap.
    This story really intrigued me since I've never read a Joker fic before. I've got to say, this is really good. You have a few spelling and grammar mistakes here and there, but nothing too major. I would suggest proofreading a little more. Other than that, this is great and I wish you well with the rest. Keep up the good work.

    -Jess xx
    August 16th, 2012 at 10:09pm
  • katie13

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    Hey, I'm from comment swap :-)
    I thought that this would be a my chem story because of the name... but ah well.
    You have a lot of punctuation mistakes, but apart from that, your spelling is good and your plot is flowing nicely. This story has a lot of potential if you fix your punctuation a little!
    Also, a little more line spacing would be great.
    August 12th, 2012 at 11:20pm
  • lovesicklullabies

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    ahh. i love joker stories. :3
    oh btw I'm here from comment swap.
    This is a good story. There's a few grammar mistakes, and I think you should work on varying the sentence structure a bit more. BUt otherwise, i like the characters and it's a good plot line! Keep up the good work!

    on your layout, do you think you could make it a bit bright. and space out the paragraphs. It's a bit hard to read. Otherwise it's fine!
    August 12th, 2012 at 09:46am