Unit 731 - Comments

Comment swap brought me here, and like a lot of other people said... this really isn't my type of story, and seeing the image you chose for your layout I noticed it must have been something to do with science/experiments. So I read a bit of it and I liked it to be honest. The choice of words you chose were really good and high level vocab which made me want to read a bit more :P

This is brilliant, however it's not my type of thing, so I've recommended this so you may get some proper feedback. I thank comment swap for bringing me to this story, although it wasn't my thing, but it was enjoyable. Keep it up! :)

I am...absolutely speechless.
I don't always get to read historical fiction but I can say out of the few that I have read this one is the best I've read. I don't think I've read anything with such realism in it; the details were so well done that it was heart-wrenching to read. (I think in this case that is the desirable effect)
This story was filled with "ghosts" of WWII, if that makes any sense. It was like I was watching and listening to a documentary. I say listening because even though I was reading it, I feel as if I am getting the story from the first-count witness, in which this story is being told.
Ah, and so much research! I have to commend and respect that; not all writers bother with accuracy. Even though I don't know much about this subject, it still felt horrific and real so you did a great job.

Spelling, grammar, structure...they were all nice. No complaints whatsoever.

Oh my, I'm rambling. So I'm going to cut this short.
This was excellently written. You have my recommendation.

Dear god... What do I even say? The comment swap brought me here and boy am I glad it did. I haven't yet read the second chapter, but I might have to read this is small quantities. The amount of detail you put in the prologue was perfect. I love historical fiction stories and this fit the bill perfectly. I had this sick feeling in my stomach the entire time I read and I have to give you props for that. I'm not usually affected by things I read, so that is a huge plus to your story! I'm definitely subscribing and recommending! Great job!

Man oh man, this was amazing. The amount of detail you put into just the prologue was horrific... in a good way.. I loved the graphic nature of this story. Way to not really hold much back. It sounds like a horrible way to live life; torturing others. I've never heard of this stuff when my teachers would go over WWII. Not once, so this is all just a big surprise to me.

Your first chapter is really good as well. I like how you kind of test the waters with his background instead of straight up diving in. It's very cool. I love the detail about the Japanese uniform. I would never know what these people looked like if you hadn't explained it so well. I like that this is showing how he got involved in this.

Comment swap also brought me to your story and I'm really glad it did. This is an amazing story and you have great talent.

This. Just...wow. It is written magnificently. I love the detail. It doesn't seem too descriptive, but it's not lacking either. This is just...I can't put this into words. The way you describe the torture and pain is wonderfully horrific, and it paints the picture into my mind. I love things that have to do with history, and this definitely intrigues me. It makes me want to read more and to be sucked into this story even more. From this, it seems like you are an AMAZING writer, using such descriptive sentences and words, and it paints a picture for the readers. Honestly, I am glad the comment swap brought me to this story, because this story has given me chills. Please, do keep up the good work, because I will definitely be subscribing.

Hello there. :) Comment swap brought me to this story of yours. Seriously that is by far one of the really well written stories on mibbaland. The summary pulled me in right away. And even thought I don't like war stories and stories like that, this one is pretty good. I liked your descriptions too. You did a good job in writing this. No need to mention your writing skills cause they are superb. Keep on writing and share your imagination with your fans. XD That's all. bye. :)

[comment swap] Horrifically descriptive. You have a phenomenal voice that immerses you into the scene, as sickening as it is. I finished this story feeling like the blood was on my hands. Fantastic job!

This is good. I don't know what Unit 731 is exactly, but it's still very well written. The summary honestly was very overwhelming(?). The words you used were collectively very powerful and that's originally what drew me in. Keep writing.

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I am in love with this already. It's incredible. I'm a history buff myself and just reading this, I don't know. You really know how to make someone feel like they're actually there and in the moment feeling what he's feeling.
Historical fictions have always been a favourite of mine but a lot of people can't pull it off. You seem to have it down pat. Seriously, I'm so glad comment swap gave me your story. Absolutely phenomenal. No complaints whatsoever.

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Okay, I don't even know what to say haha. This is freaking amazing...

I've always been intrigued by world war II, and the brutalities that happened in that time. My dad was in the army, and I can't imagine what it was like for him out there. He never really explained it to me, but you seem to capture what I understood really well. Keep it up, this is really really good.

Generally, I'd be listing complaints....
But I just can't. You wrote everything so beautifully and you didn't lack in descriptions. I've always been intrigued by the effects of forced murder and your story so far really seems to highlight the trauma in it. It's amazing that the character is realistic enough to realise that he's not saving his country, he was just being cruel and evil.
Do continue,

This is such a unique take on a story, especially that it has to do with World War II and just in the prologue, you've already done such an amazing job with your words, describing to the point where i feel like I am actually standing beside the man and seeing these horrible things happen. You have such a great talent for writing and I am definitely excited to read the next chapter!

Oh my god, I love this. I have a real interest in war stories and the effects it has on people. This is insanely good. My story depicts some of that too. I love the explanations you give and the imagery you use. I get an extremely well painted picture of what the narrator is going through. I am hoping to hear more from this story, and I will subscribe to it.

This is a very different idea. Very graphic. You described everything in depth, which is very much needed for a piece of work such as this. You really allow your audience to be engulfed in the scenery you describe, it's an amazing skill.
"It was me that yielded the surgeon’s knife, time after time, closing my ears to the screams and pleading cries of the thirty-three men, women, children and infants that I carelessly cut to pieces, ruthlessly slashing into them with the knife, time and time again. I was the one tearing families apart at the seams,"
Wow. Just wow, this segment of your story really got to me, the sentence structuring of this is flawless.
This is was amazing, honestly. I don't know if you plan on continuing this, but either way, you are very talented. Thanks for such a great write. (: