Scumbag - Comments

Before I start, thanks for all the con-crit! I can't believe I looked over all those silly mistakes. -.- And about the tenses - I know it's not exactly grammatically correct, but it's part of my theme, so yeah. It happens.
Now, onto your story. The only negative thing I have to say is that the summary cuts off a little a the ends. I don't know if it's just my browser or my laptop, or what, but maybe it's just me. It's pretty nice. I don't have much to say about the first chapter - it's pretty solid and consistent through out, so kudos. Chapter Two is interesting because there's a lot more insight into the characters, and I think Dixie is my favorite in this one. She's a wild card. Chapter Three is a nice change, and Brian seems to be as awkward as I am - which is just too precious. He's too cute. The next chapter makes Brian even cuter - "Stop tickling me!" - and he tells ~~spooky~~ stories to creep people out and I just approve of him completely.He knew. ~~cue giggles at Billie Joe being embarrassed~~ Chapter Five includes a sassy and blushing Brian, a slap-happy Dixie, and an angst-y Billie, which makes for a pretty nice chapter. Six and seven are pretty sad, kind of, and I feel bad for Billie and I just want to snuggle with him (or make Brian snuggle with him >:D). Eight makes me want to shake my head disapprovingly at Dixie (tsk-tsk) and want to just lock Billie and Brian in the car until they made up :3 Nine makes me want to shake Brian and tell him that his red cardigan is endearing because cardigans are cool and they kissed, which is like, oh, yes.
I can't say anything negative about this because it just flows and works right. I give it an A, because it's intense, but in a slow, smoldering way, and it's really hard to do something like that. But you have, so there you go. :3

I will do your comment swap with my story 'Strange'
This such a great story and the first Billie Joe Slash. I really like that you are taking your time with starting the relationship between Brian and Billie. I can't wait for more

This is soooo good! :)

Billie All the way!!!

@ Join the Masquerade
Aha, yea, I was thinking about that because the moniter on my laptop is a bit small (horizontally), so, that must be why but you're welcome. :) They might've gotten rid of the blue strips.

@ Tygra's Kitten Kori It's only just occurred to me that I no longer get those weird blue strips down the sides of layouts anymore. Weird.
The layout looks fine to me, but it could be different PCs or search engines to blame haha. Thanks :)

First off, the layout is gorgeous, but it stretches my screen out too much. Maybe it's because of my monitor, I don't know. I love how you portray Billie and his relationship with Dixie is really funny. I generally don't read Green Day or Placebo fanfics often but this is one of the better fics I've read on here. :) I would just making the content box fit the screen a bit better because like I said, it seems to stretch my screen drastically and I kinda don't like zooming in constantly. >_< Good job!