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  • cemmia

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    Awesome story! Really like Chloe and I just love Tig!
    December 25th, 2014 at 12:56am
  • Speeding Cars

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    Comment swap sent me here alsoooooo! I love it. I'm not really a fan of the show that much, I don't hate it, I just haven't seen them all, but I've seen a few and reading this story made me want to go back and watch it. Your writing style is good, nice and clean and I didn't really notice any grammatical errors. I love the layout too! Update soon
    June 9th, 2014 at 10:56am
  • ayapritabelia

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    Comment swap sends me here! Love this! Update it! (: x
    February 6th, 2014 at 09:18am
  • DuckyDuck

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    Love it! Please update very soon! I need more of this story. This is the only Tig story that I have read and actually liked. Keep up the good work. I'll continue reading this as long as you write it. Consider me a fan(:
    December 11th, 2012 at 05:56am
  • AshleyVC88

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    Tig is my favorite. I love this. More please! :)
    November 26th, 2012 at 05:52pm
  • Music.DrownLife

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    It might be kind of a filler, but it was grand. I like that she won't say she loves him back. She's pulling strings, because she cares. And Gemma is perfect. You write her really well. She is my favorite, so don't take that lightly. =D
    September 14th, 2012 at 08:29am
  • TheGoodLlama

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    Love this story!
    September 14th, 2012 at 07:21am
  • freshtrixz

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    I just found this story and I am sooo glad I did because I couldn't stop reading until I got to the latest chapter lol. Your writing style is terrific! I love this story so far, anything with Tig is bad ass ;) keep up the good work I'll definitely be looking forward to this stories updates (:
    September 13th, 2012 at 08:59am
  • Music.DrownLife

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    I can see a nosy Juice.
    A little Gemma is just what Tig needs. Hehe
    More inside her life. Little by little and not over doing it. Nice.

    This is all very in-character for Tig. Him being an asshole and a liar and pervert all packed tight into this story. It's a thing of beauty (he still creeps me out). =D
    September 3rd, 2012 at 06:56am
  • early_graves

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    Love love love.
    I always smile when I get my email for this!
    September 2nd, 2012 at 06:58am
  • xxemergencyy

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    Once again, you're a fantastic writer. I don't think I've told you that enough times yet. I've only actually watched Sons of Anarchy a couple of times, but I really like your story. :)
    August 30th, 2012 at 08:56am
  • ThatFreakInTheCorner

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    I'm from comment swap! I've never really read any Sons of Anarchy fan fiction (mostly because I've never even watched the show), but I like this. Your writing is both wonderfully descriptive and grammatically correct, which is much appreciated. I love Tig's personality, and Chloe is pretty dang awesome too! I can't wait to read more! ^_^
    August 30th, 2012 at 06:44am
  • Music.DrownLife

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    John Teller bitches!
    Drunk and wanting to party with the MC? She hasn't been there for one of their parties. Mother of god!
    You have a broken image code.
    Tig comes collecting. I was wondering when he'd go after her. Poor Half Sack didn't stand a chance.
    August 29th, 2012 at 08:40am
  • early_graves

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    Aw shit it's about to get even better. Loved this chapter. ^_^
    August 29th, 2012 at 12:06am
  • marshallomnipotence

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    Well I'm glad I got given this story, the first paragraph was what had done it. You're writing flows brilliantly, I had no trouble with any spelling or gramatical issues. I think this, well what I read, is amazing. The layout usually isn't a subject I discuss unless its really bad or really great. I like it, at first I thought the black was gonna hurt my eyes but it didn't. I think I'll subscribe to catch up on the following chapters! I really like the plot and the main character you paint a picture for the reader and thats a mega plus. Good job, keep on wiritng!
    August 28th, 2012 at 01:16am
  • Music.DrownLife

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    Wonderful music taste.
    Creepy Tig being creepy. Haha I was kind of laughing through out this, because it was awkward and ace.
    There is also more detail, which you went into smoothly, of the leading lady.

    Why I do say, a Juice one shot for little ol' me?
    And there's an Opie story! He's such a cutie.
    August 26th, 2012 at 12:08pm
  • Dark Romance

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    Comment Swap sent here and I glad that it did!

    This story is written beautifully! I'm not a fan of the show but you have taken the idea and made it into something entertaining and exciting. I love Chole. She is one bad ass and I think there needs to be more female characters like her. It's also gritty and realistic. It's a great story and I am really look forward to reading more.

    Good job!
    August 25th, 2012 at 07:36am
  • teenagedream91

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    Hello, from comment swap here. This story is beautifully written, don't know who the Sons of Anarchy are, but this really did pull me in by the first chapter. I just love Chole and her demeanor towards things and she seems very well off on her own. She is the type of character that you don't run across too often and it was refreshing to see a different girl character instead of her being innocent and naive most of the time. Her wits is what makes me laugh some of the time when she converse with people, I find it amusing how she holds a conversation. :) Good luck on your future work and chapters.
    August 25th, 2012 at 06:31am
  • Miss May

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    Argh read it again! I cannot get enough of this story. I am just in love with the way you describe the characters and the words you use to describe to the audience what is going on. It's just so exciting to read and a fresh spin on a lot of the SOA Fan Fictions. I simply cannot wait for more!
    August 25th, 2012 at 03:39am
  • early_graves

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    I really love this. Like... A lot.
    I love their personalities.
    Great story
    August 24th, 2012 at 05:33pm