Been a Son - Comments, page 2

Music.DrownLife (100)

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Oh my god! I can just see Gemma eyeing her.
“Your bruises have bruises.” Awesome.

Smart girl, that one is. Rubbing some elbows and shit.

August 24th, 2012 at 08:19am

femme fatale. (350)

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@whenwefirstmet , my layout is on the fritz. you have to click the layout button to find it. sorry. i'm fixing it now.

August 24th, 2012 at 07:16am

whenwefirstmet (100)

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i can''t find a chapter...

August 24th, 2012 at 07:01am

Miss May (100)

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This is great! I am really, really digging your style of writing, it's so refreshing to read!

August 24th, 2012 at 06:26am

Music.DrownLife (100)

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1:
His eyes! Unf. The best part about him.
The description and word choices are amazing. It was all well played out.

2:
He so looks like Kurt!
Juice can take me anytime he wants. Hehe
'“Are you fucking retarded?” Tig screamed, hoisting her up. “Get back on the bike, you stupid bitch.”' Perfect.
And this: '“Oh, fuck me – what are you crying for?”'
You capture him wonderfully. I might be in love. =D

August 22nd, 2012 at 08:08am