Emotions Like Wonderlandian Lullabies - Comments

My my, aren't we the master of surrealism?

Evocative imagery and delightful metaphors. You've woven together beautiful descriptions with macabre and downright disturbing visions, especially the last paragraph, bringing together the world's beloved tale of a misplaced young girl with arguably the most controversial epic in all human history.

Overall, this is a stunning display of how the written word ought to be treated and handled: delicately except for few instances where it must be bludgeoned and reformed by terrifying similes.

So many emotions in so few words. I've come to realize that some of the most powerful string of words are the shortest. The description of just everything in this is wonderful. I love the way you first described the broken keys of a piano like the teeth of the Cheshire Cat. Then turned around and say that they are like that of the Red Queen. I'll be completely honest none of this made sense to me, yet it made all the sense in an odd and beautiful way. This is sort of like things I have written on the spot. Just words that come to mind to form a sentence or two, and sometimes even something like this. You have just managed to make something very powerful with those words. Something I hope I have been able to do and will be able to do always. I applaud you. Thank you for sharing this with the world of mibba.

This is wonderful - poetic, strong, emotional. I love it. I feels almost like so much has been condensed into the smallest of forms, much like strong emotions bottled up that have to erupt. It's beautiful.