Aren't We Just Terrified? - Comments

  • pbreyoung1996

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    I want more please. this is such a good story! =)
    July 28th, 2013 at 03:54am
  • Angel29

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    Please continue there aren't enough carlisle stories!!
    July 2nd, 2013 at 03:30am
  • skinny love.

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    But some advice, you're rushing into the story way too fast. You should write out more detail about how she feels. You should show more about her life and etc, not just quickly tell it.
    January 23rd, 2013 at 06:53pm
  • skinny love.

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    I'm so excited. Finally a Carlisle story!
    PLEASE continue!:)
    January 23rd, 2013 at 06:40pm
  • foREVer an Angel

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    Super glad you continued this story!!! I love it and can't wait to see what happens!!!
    January 8th, 2013 at 07:19am
  • KillJoySynner

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    Good update, please please please keep going! I wonder who that mystery person was
    January 8th, 2013 at 02:57am
  • foREVer an Angel

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    I wish you'd continue this story. There aren't a lot of Carlisle stories. Update soon!!!
    January 8th, 2013 at 12:38am
  • Angelofhellsfire

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    Oh I didn't know this was going to be a Carlisle story! Awesome, i like it so far.

    I kind of wish it had showed a little more of what she was thinking when she followed the Cullen family to their home though. It was really great don't get me wrong but that was an opportunity to let some of her charactor out and show us what her personality was.

    I expected some kind of argument with herself, you know? To show what she was thinking when she got in her car to follow them. Did she at any moment rethink about following a bunch of strangers simply because Edward was weird to her and had golden eyes?

    I may be wrong and she may just be a stubborn person. I'm assuming that because it seemed as if only curiosity that drove her. In my opinion everyone would have doubts about following a stranger home though. I like that you did
    Lol I rambled I know sorry. It really was a good first chapter, don't just go by what I just said only, that's just something I would have liked to know more about in the chapter. Other then that I really enjoyed it. It's not often that I even come across a Carlisle fanfic. I hope you keep at it!
    August 26th, 2012 at 02:09pm
  • KillJoySynner

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    I shall mentally poke you until you update:) i like it! :D
    August 26th, 2012 at 06:09am
  • Angelofhellsfire

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    It looks good from the summary. I think I might like to read this one. :)
    August 22nd, 2012 at 09:42am