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it wasn't meant to really be anything but a description [:

Umm....I'm a little confused. Was this suppose to be a story or a poem? 'Cause it looks and sounds more like a poem. Also, if this was suppose to be a story, I don't see any kind of plot, character development, etc. Your writing style isn't bad, it's very descriptive and like I said before I'm just very confused. Keep writing! :3