Summertime Suicide. - Comments

  • VoiceOfTheSoul

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    You're welcome. :) This is a good branch away from what you're use to writing and definitely has depth.
    Those two can Twist the Viper behind closed doors lol
    I had it being Matt but I don't know who it could be at this point.
    Haha, I knew what you meant but my mind usually picks out stuff like that.
    Denying you were wanting to be seductively evil with him, lmao!
    November 28th, 2013 at 07:24am
  • AestheticStar

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    @ VoiceOfTheSoul
    Thanks. It was something different from the stuff I'd normally write, just like the Elm Street fic was a bit different. I was trying to branch away from doing a lot of the romance/smut stories, & trying to make something with a little more depth to it. I know there's a little Jeff/Randy stuff going on in this one, but I probably won't elaborate on it too heavily, seeing as I mostly want this to stray from some of that stuff. Any ideas who it could be? Lol. I kind of like people's thoughts on that.
    Whoops haha. No one even pointed that out, so I assume they knew what I meant. Fixed it though. Thanks. :) Maybe deep down, I was wanting Punk back then, & denying it, lmao!
    November 28th, 2013 at 04:16am
  • VoiceOfTheSoul

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    I like the concept of this story & I'm digging this murder myster story & can't wait to read the remainder of it. :)
    Each time I'm reading from the mystery person's POV I'm hearing Max's voice, guess I've been playing quite a bit of MP3 lately, lol
    Oh yeah, in the first chapter, I think you meant to say "foul play" not "foreplay" I was like, "Foreplay? What was she thinking about or was Punk partaking in some kind of foreplay beforehand?" lmao
    November 23rd, 2013 at 10:54pm
  • AestheticStar

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    @ DuskAtDawn
    Haha, I think it's harder with lengthy stories, with multiple chapters. It seems if I do a short one-shot, I can get through them no problem, as long as I have the drive. But when I start losing motivation, or get other ideas while working on a chaptered one, I slack & prolong finishing it, which is ultimately my downfall lol. I've probably got at least 80+ stories finished, but just haven't gotten around to actually posting the majority of my favorites. Poetry is hard for me, 'cause I need to be really going through a bad time or something to write, lol.
    November 28th, 2012 at 07:05am
  • BellaRayne

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    Oh don't I know it! I've never once finished something... actually that's a lie. I've finished two one-shots. But one of those I constantly edit. But I've never been able to finish a chaptered fanfic. Most of mine I started... like four or five years ago... and I haven't gotten past the third chapter on most. I use to do some poetry... but the last one I did was in 2009 I think. XD
    November 28th, 2012 at 06:52am
  • AestheticStar

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    Me too. I've had the worst writers block for like, over a year, & haven't really written anything or finished anything in a year. I'm still struggling to write & complete this in full so it can be posted, & I've been working at it for three years. I just started to break through some of the blockage, but it's just hard to focus sometimes. Writing sucks sometimes, haha. I've been kind of doing more poetry than anything, but I need to refocus on stories. I'll have to check out some of your fics. :)
    November 28th, 2012 at 06:46am
  • BellaRayne

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    @ AestheticStar
    I need to do more of that myself. I slack off waaaaay too much. Haha, indeed. Mysteries gotta stay mysteries.
    November 28th, 2012 at 06:41am
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    @ DuskAtDawn
    That is very true, & I've enjoyed writing whatever has come to mind for years. It's a way to keep the imagination flowing haha.
    ;) Always got to have mystery, right? I'll try to get an update done soon. I've been slacking on a lot of stuff online, & working on my fanfics sadly.
    November 28th, 2012 at 06:32am
  • BellaRayne

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    Well hey, writing for shits and giggles is always a good thing to get brain juices flowing and have some fun.
    And now you have me not thinking it's Matt... but I still have my suspicions about him. Haha. Can't wait to see where you have this story go.
    November 15th, 2012 at 06:03am
  • AestheticStar

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    Thank you. I was uncertain about writing a story like this, 'cause I didn't think I could do it since this was my first one really. And with it revolving around WWE wrestlers, I figured it'd get laughed at, haha. I appreciate the feedback though. :) I'll do an update shortly.
    November 15th, 2012 at 04:19am
  • BellaRayne

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    Lmao. Well that's what I've figured so far. I really do like the overall concept though. I'm always a fan of these types of stories.
    November 15th, 2012 at 03:58am
  • AestheticStar

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    @ DuskAtDawn You may never know. I need to finish this story still, and have many ideas for it. ;) But thanks for reading what's there so far. Hope to update soon.
    November 15th, 2012 at 03:49am
  • BellaRayne

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    And the killer is Matthew. Or at least that's who it seems to be at this point.
    November 15th, 2012 at 03:44am