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  • hiwagang hapis

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    Hey! I'm sorry it took so long to give you what you asked from the giveaway blog Don And I'm actually subscribed to the prequel tehe

    For the summary, I think it's okay like that. Although, I don't think "outlawed" is the right choice to describe a relationship. I don't know but that's just my hunch XD

    “Please, all I’m asking for it five minutes. Just- let me explain,”
    I think this should be is rather than it.

    “Chance, - I don’t know what to say to make this better,”
    I don't think you need the hyphen there.

    He quieted for a moment
    You can use word play as an alternative to quieted. It's kind of awkward to read.

    Overall, I think there was a lot of drama bombs. I'm not a huge fan of drama but I think you ended this well albeit the cliffhanger which is annoying (in a good way because that builds suspense). Just proofread your chapters again because you might have typos or awkward word choices here and there that you might wanna change.
    June 22nd, 2015 at 05:47am
  • Doublenickels

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    I just came across these two stories, and binge read over the last week. It took over my life, I was reading this every moment I had. I was so relieved when atticus wanted to try and adopt Arch, but then all of a sudden, her and ronnie were over !! That was heartbreaking. I never really liked Chance coming into the picture either, but will wait to see what happens. I am hoping for good things to happen in the next instalment of this story. Smile
    June 17th, 2015 at 09:11am
  • lizinreverse

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    OMG. i've followed this story for so long. Can't wait for the sequel.
    January 12th, 2015 at 05:43am
  • maddiecaps

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    I really enjoyed reading both your stories so far and I look forward to the next one. I can't wait for the next part and I hope they end up together.
    January 11th, 2015 at 07:53am
  • WickedMaddness

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    I love this! All the tension, it's brilliant. :)
    January 9th, 2015 at 06:10pm
  • maddiecaps

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    I'm so excited to read the unveiling of the plot. I am also excited about the baby. I feel like it will bring them together. Her dad is going to flip out. But overall I'm excited to read the coming chapters
    December 8th, 2014 at 08:20pm
  • lizinreverse

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    Omg I don't want this to end. I want them to be happy and ahh her dad is gonna be so pissed. I wonder how Arch is gonna feel? So many questions!!! Can't wait for the next update Very Happy
    December 8th, 2014 at 05:49am
  • caitieariel23

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    Loved the update can't wait to read more! So happy she decided to keep the baby now she just need to get back with Ronnie!
    December 8th, 2014 at 02:55am
  • lizinreverse

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    OH MY!!!! SO EXCITED TO READ MORE Mr. Green
    December 6th, 2014 at 03:12am
  • OhsoAlexx

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    Gahh! I want Ronnie Atticus, Arch and the baby to live happily ever after but kinda dont if it makes sense?! I cant wait to read what happens! Your such a great writer keep it up my love!
    December 3rd, 2014 at 01:06pm
  • MyriadWonders

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    I just found your stories not to long ago and good lord am I in love with your writing!!! I can't wait to read more, but I'm gonna go look at your other writings while I wait ;)
    December 2nd, 2014 at 09:39am
  • RandaRue22

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    As much as I loved how this story started off, Atticus is just becoming way to annoying to me so I don't think I will continue to read this.
    November 2nd, 2014 at 09:02pm
  • RandaRue22

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    As much as I loved how this story started off, Atticus is just becoming way to annoying to me so I don't think I will continue to read this.
    November 2nd, 2014 at 09:02pm
  • Tiffani!!!

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    I always wondered how fictional characters could piss people off so much, but now I understand because of Atticus, she seems so naive and self centered bleh lol
    November 2nd, 2014 at 04:53pm
  • caitieariel23

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    Poor Ronnie :( Atticus needs to get back with him.
    November 2nd, 2014 at 04:34pm
  • maddiecaps

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    Omg she finally told him. I really want this thing with chance to end because I think Ronnie and Atticus are perfect for each other.
    November 2nd, 2014 at 03:46pm
  • caitieariel23

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    Thank you so good!!
    October 30th, 2014 at 04:20am
  • caitieariel23

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    Neeeeeed an update, love this story. I keep checking daily!
    October 29th, 2014 at 12:18pm
  • lizinreverse

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    yayyyy! Heather will force her too! #teamronnie
    October 19th, 2014 at 01:29am
  • maddiecaps

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    Omgggg. Atticus is being stupid. She should have been taken the test.
    October 16th, 2014 at 12:22pm