This chapter was beyond adorable and I lost count how times I was like "Unf" at mention of Brian's body, and then them ending up in bed and the kiss and just arghhhh UPDATE SOON DAMMIT
My eyes were all teary reading the flashback and then by the end of the chapter I was just melting because Brian is so sweet. So happy you finally updated, looking forward to the next chapter!!! ^_^
The summary intersted me so I started reading. I enjoied the first chapter and got hooked when I read the second. I was sad as I read the third because that‘s all there is so far. This story is written really well. The diolouge bugs me how it‘s written, but it‘s your story. :) I haven‘t noticed any mistakes yet, which makes the story even better. I love the way you describe things, like how the house still looks, like Jimmy‘s still there. As I read, I feel really bad for Emily, I‘ve never lost anyone but I can imagine how she feels. I‘m dieing to know how Jimmy died. I abostuly love this story and I can‘t wait for more! Keep up the great work! :)
Oh man, a Jimmy fanfic. These tear me up and even though I'm writing one myself, it kills me to read one and realize that Jimmy's still gone and he ain't coming back. I can relate so much to Emily, I've felt that way over many people. Too attached to let go, even though you know it's only screwing you over. The flashbacks helped me understand how close Emily and Jimmy were. I really enjoyed this, even though it made me tear up a little. Good work dear!
I like that I can feel her emotions and just how attached she is to Jimmy. I also like the flashbacks. They really help me understand just how close the two were. Although, I'd like it better if it was more part of the story.. like there's a transition from the present to the flashback, and not just a "-Flashback-" indicating that the flashback has started and ended. :-)