I Have So Much to Say, But You're So Far Away - Comments

  • Red-Lips-Like-Razors

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    Awwh, I hope she'll be okay!
    January 3rd, 2013 at 06:14pm
  • Its_Your_Nightmare

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    @ Shazza Rose
    haha I kept you in mind while choosing to have Bri shirtless, thought you'd like that. ;D
    November 14th, 2012 at 11:44am
  • Red-Lips-Like-Razors

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    This chapter was beyond adorable and I lost count how times I was like "Unf" at mention of Brian's body, and then them ending up in bed and the kiss and just arghhhh UPDATE SOON DAMMIT
    November 14th, 2012 at 11:41am
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    My eyes were all teary reading the flashback and then by the end of the chapter I was just melting because Brian is so sweet. So happy you finally updated, looking forward to the next chapter!!! ^_^
    November 10th, 2012 at 01:26pm
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    Great story so far, very deeply emotional, and some of the scenes are just too cute for words! Looking forward to future updates!!! ^_^
    October 24th, 2012 at 02:06pm
  • antivist.

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    October 13th, 2012 at 08:41pm
  • Skyscraper

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    The summary intersted me so I started reading. I enjoied the first chapter and got hooked when I read the second. I was sad as I read the third because that‘s all there is so far. This story is written really well. The diolouge bugs me how it‘s written, but it‘s your story. :) I haven‘t noticed any mistakes yet, which makes the story even better. I love the way you describe things, like how the house still looks, like Jimmy‘s still there. As I read, I feel really bad for Emily, I‘ve never lost anyone but I can imagine how she feels. I‘m dieing to know how Jimmy died. I abostuly love this story and I can‘t wait for more! Keep up the great work! :)
    September 21st, 2012 at 12:19pm
  • RaeStardust.

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    Oh man, a Jimmy fanfic. These tear me up and even though I'm writing one myself, it kills me to read one and realize that Jimmy's still gone and he ain't coming back.
    I can relate so much to Emily, I've felt that way over many people. Too attached to let go, even though you know it's only screwing you over. The flashbacks helped me understand how close Emily and Jimmy were. I really enjoyed this, even though it made me tear up a little. Good work dear!
    September 7th, 2012 at 08:41pm
  • five train stations

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    I like that I can feel her emotions and just how attached she is to Jimmy. I also like the flashbacks. They really help me understand just how close the two were. Although, I'd like it better if it was more part of the story.. like there's a transition from the present to the flashback, and not just a "-Flashback-" indicating that the flashback has started and ended. :-)
    September 6th, 2012 at 12:20pm
  • Its_Your_Nightmare

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    I'll be updating soon, I just had a whole heap of assignments this week. T.T
    I'll work on it today. :3
    September 5th, 2012 at 04:22am
  • antivist.

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    MORE!!!!!! SOOON!!!!!!!!! okay, *le sighs* there I've said it. more! :3
    September 5th, 2012 at 03:57am
  • Brusnop-is-real

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    you need to update my sexy sex panther. or im gonna find you and cry on you.
    September 4th, 2012 at 01:30am
  • A7xFanFoREVer

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    That is beautiful.
    I'm in tears now.
    c':
    August 24th, 2012 at 10:53am
  • NattyMullins

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    -holds a bucket for my tears-
    August 23rd, 2012 at 04:12am