Holy piss tits this is incredible! I fucking love Oliver, and I fucking love Tom, and I fucking love sibling rivalry. Ha! I would really love it if you would continue? Pretty please? I'll do anything!!!
dear god i'm in love with this! i do think the way that oli treats her is a little too harsh, but it's all for theatrical purposes, i understand. however, i do really want to know what's wrong with oli. and why he's so "sick". but all in all, i just love a good tom sykes story. seeing the underdog come out on top. and for all the oli and tom stories i've read, it seems different. i'm really intrigued. and i hope you continue to write more on this. also, you have an incredible way with words. keep it up!
Wow, I am surprised I am the first to comment! I love this story in its entirety so far and I love it because even though it is realistic fiction, this is real unlike some other romancey things. OH YEAH- that's the other thing. It doesn't seem to be a romance at all, at least not the primary focus. I can't wait to see the story progress along- will Oliver ever get better and not be such a dick? Will she keep sleeping with Tom?