Goodnight, Moon. - Comments

  • daisyfairy

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    AHHH YOU USED THE PROMPT I POSTED!! EXCELLENT. I don't really do 1D at all, but I made a special exception for this one, and I really liked it as a story. Awesome job omg, how great is that prompt right? <333
    August 26th, 2012 at 01:34pm
  • salvatore.

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    This sounds really different from other 1D fics on here... I'm glad I clicked this, it's already great! Those last couple lines for the first chapter were great, definitely hooked me in. I like the style of writing, too. The title is great (one of my favorite songs ever), and like monroe can go and a starship ranger, I like how her name is Luna, and relates to the title!
    I definitely recommended!
    August 26th, 2012 at 04:03am
  • lucky luciano

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    A little bit disturbing, but I loved it! I don't usually read One Direction fanfics but this one stood out for some reason... and I'm glad I decided to read it! I love the layout, the gif of Niall as the banner (what a cutie). I like the prompt, and the whole idea basically. It is a little morbid, but it's great either way. I really like your style of writing. And I agree with monroe can go, I liked how her name was Luna and it's called Goodnight, Moon. Awesome job!
    August 25th, 2012 at 08:58pm
  • orange county.

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    Creepy. But some beautiful imagery. And I love how she's called Luna and the story is called Goodnight, Moon.
    August 23rd, 2012 at 01:36am